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Old 02-04-04, 08:02 PM   #1
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Old 02-04-04, 08:13 PM   #2
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Weird .. But dope .. Last line got me lost .. But the rest were sicc .. Especially the first line of the last stanza .. Dopeness .. Was expectiin' somethin' completely diff. cuz of the title .. But none the less this was dope also .. I hate U cuz I couldn't highlight my quotables cuz U put it as an image so that's why there isn't any in my reply .. LoL .. Keep writin' man .. One
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Old 02-04-04, 08:48 PM   #3
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WHAT
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WHAT WHAT WHAT
touch me....I mean....oh my god scribe.

this made a ridiculous amount of sense to me....was it supposed to?
I don't know, but I really enjoyed it.
it had this weird flow to it, that didn't flow at all, but it didn't seem chopped up either.

if this verse was a woman I would rape her.
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Old 02-04-04, 08:58 PM   #4
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Old 02-04-04, 08:59 PM   #5
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dope...lost me though...somewhere in the text..help..MAP!.lol...nice bruk..
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Old 02-04-04, 09:30 PM   #6
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Weird .. But dope .. Last line got me lost .. But the rest were sicc .. Especially the first line of the last stanza .. Dopeness .. Was expectiin' somethin' completely diff. cuz of the title .. But none the less this was dope also .. I hate U cuz I couldn't highlight my quotables cuz U put it as an image so that's why there isn't any in my reply .. LoL .. Keep writin' man .. One

Hahaha. Thanks Mentill. .Gif is a file type of an image by the way.
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WHAT
WHAT
WHAT WHAT WHAT
touch me....I mean....oh my god scribe.

this made a ridiculous amount of sense to me....was it supposed to?
I don't know, but I really enjoyed it.
it had this weird flow to it, that didn't flow at all, but it didn't seem chopped up either.

if this verse was a woman I would rape her.


HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Thanks Mave This does have a lot of actual heart felt truths and all. I have a couple different styles of writing, I mixed them together this time.
Thanks again man.
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Old 02-04-04, 09:47 PM   #7
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Damn....
Dope shit Bruk
Made alot of sence
Enjoyable to read.......
Damn... not what i expected

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Old 02-05-04, 09:24 PM   #8
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Thank you

Whoa...don't everyone reply at once now.
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Old 02-05-04, 09:29 PM   #9
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I must say this was nice..I really liked your presentation(very original)...I enjoyed your intro the most..and the addstract was cool...nice work...peace~~~
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Old 02-05-04, 09:35 PM   #10
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haha

whatever mind bending drugs u were on send me some..
address will be in your inbox


abstract as fuck...
and yet like people said it seemed to make sense to that minute part of my brain where strange things are real
flowed nice and the crazy content was cool and interesting
for some strange reason i know what you were talking about..
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that shit was aight............................................. ......propz.........................
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Old 02-12-04, 01:22 PM   #13
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^Stop replying like that, ..
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