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06-16-04, 11:52 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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06-16-04, 09:46 PM
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06-17-04, 08:38 AM
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i changed my title !!
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not wasting any time with this, checkin in i'll post some time saturday then
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06-17-04, 12:58 PM
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Breathing Constently, For every Breath is awoken Peep Death from every Curve for life is now spoken I am 75 years old and here I am walking with a cane Nobody helped, Nobody wanted me becuz they thought I was insane Where am I in my house, where am I, Is this a chair Little did I know I was close to the stairs I trip and fell couldnt do nothing couldnt even grab the door Finally my neck felt a sharp pain by time I hit the bottom floor 1 hours later no maybe 2 hours later I face my dark coldness like if I was a pop-cicle Where am I, Nobody answered where am I no replie,Nothing but a single obsticle 2 tunnel lights apear as they both lead a single way Shook with my own fear left me breathless with nothing to say I ran right, No wait maybe its the left "Ohh im so confused" Thinking the death bed game is leaving me heart abused I waited thinking for 1 day and 2 single hard hungry night Cant wait no more im getting hungry but a cherishing light Reaching out of my sight leaving brain focused and where to go I thought I was a good ol man who's Blood Pressure was low As I walk steadily by my heart is shook and pounding with fear The light gets bigger the light gets way bigger as I knew the end was near Here I am at the end of the light as Dreams and nothing but what I am behind Falling down the stairs I must be blind, as know my place is where I find Tripping and studding as a sharp pain hit my 75 year old thy but I keep walkin into the light and im here and I ask myself, 'Where am I'
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06-20-04, 02:43 AM
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