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08-25-04, 01:06 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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For$aken Vs. Triple N
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.::Rules::. 20 Line Minimum 30 Line Maximum No Crew No Hate No D/R Checks Due By 8-28-04 Spits Due By 8-30-04 Votes Due By 9-2-04 Topic: Schizophrenia Good Luck To Both! ~R~ |
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08-25-04, 09:39 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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chizeck hard topic i'll look that word up in the dictionary
 SDizzle .vs. ...Superior... Enygma .vs. ~Babylon~
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08-25-04, 11:03 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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Schizophrenia staying in the darkness in the care and safety of a household no contact, no being social with the human race I truly behold i'm labelled as a psychotic man with many disturbing disorders people call me pure insanity to reality they say i'm not in order I fear of discrimination and I hold no ounce of any determination they have no idea I see them from my windows with deep admiration beautiful birds and the trees swaying from the breeze of weather couples sitting on benches happily looking amazingly well together Everyday I think of having that kind of relationship with another but..I experienced things leaving me...like the love of my mother I cry myself to sleep but in my dreams I see shadows in my mind thoughts purely unsatisfying leaving me in distortion of mankind brain withdrawing with my body I feel it...even my soul wants out my heartbeat is slowly fading,one thing I can't live without... that second I awake,a numbness in my legs I can barely maneuver I felt a great pain and I can't seem to find a feeling remover so I struggle...I ask above are you punishing me oh dear LORD? please have my legs back to their condition... make it restore! *please...a voice in his head awakens...* a painful sight...a man twitching on a bed with no one around was outruling himself out of society a sin to make him hellbound? hopefully not for I have to search for yet another body to reside or will a split personality come up will two sides finally divide? *back to reality* sins...none what I have done is truly not worth a brief discussion *BOOM* I quickly slip and there I am left unconscious from a concussion fuck you if you don't get it...I went off blah quick key tho...
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08-26-04, 04:56 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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checkin in this....nice drop son, great job^^^^^^
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08-26-04, 08:04 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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thanks man good luck on the battle man 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-29-04, 10:55 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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one day........I don't want a no-show Triple..... 
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08-29-04, 11:57 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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Schizophrenia ....I'm paranoid, destroyed, an annoyed By the stigmas an obstacles my brain deploys Don't know who I am from one day to next Constantly perplexed wondering if I'm hexed ....My identity is leavin' me steadily Doctors claim its based in my pedigree Amongst my immediate family, I'm crazy one The family embarassment quickly shunned Disliked by my family and also myself Which only worsens my mental health On edge of insanity trying not to jump Cuz if I do I'll hit rock bottom with a thump For all to hear, breathin' but not livin' The faint hope of a cure keeps me drivin' Wishin' someday I'd be jus one person At same time hopin' condition doesn't worsen Scared every night layin' down being me Not knowin' tomorrow who I'll wake to be ....Gotta face this all alone an confined To one room, this jumpsuit now defines Who I've become, a resident of institution For criminally insane, yearnin' for retribution ....No visits.......or any recreation Jus 24 hours daily of incarceration For a murder I don't even remember Distraught when shown photos of moms dismembered They say I did it, my mind's eye can't see I'm not a murderer but the killer resides within' me
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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08-31-04, 07:14 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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blah blah blah blah uppin
nice job triple and also Good Luck!
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09-01-04, 11:58 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 896E D654
|~| nuff said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!vote hoes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!said nuff |~|
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09-02-04, 01:31 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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nuff said vote you asses!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
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09-06-04, 08:06 PM
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hmmm...where the fuck are the votes........sleepers!
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09-06-04, 08:56 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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close ass battle but v/for$aken came harder and had a bettr verse all round by just a lsim margin good hob both
sorry im not keen on tpying...
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09-11-04, 10:58 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 3A45 611B
Winner By Votes: For$aken ~R~ |
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