*no blind spits
*you must spit 20 min after check in,
or after 1st person.
*no recycling
*no biting
*no hate votes
*no crew votes
*no d/r votes

aight lets do this
let the best verse win
eh yo how long the verse?

8-10 lines........
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aight ill check in later im busy at the mo
eh how long this battle staying open for?

this homie cant beat his way out of a wet paper
bag, the only thing that he can beat is his brotha,
which is a fag, yo brotha is 2 years old and he got
you gagged, you remind me of a cheerio, cause in
all your flows you sound like a cheering hoe, and
you couldnt rock the mic, if you rocked your daddy's
clothes, you should of stuck to tapdancing, and
this cat right here "ME" is bout to merk you, i got
yo mommy lapdancing, and niggas like you cant touch
my flow, because its everlasting.

you got 20 min to drop starting now.

checkin in
spitin now
listen up this is what it shud sound like

in your name it says your young, shit your still a fucking minor/
like a thirteen year old baby freshly pulled from the vagina/

ya posts have all been wasted, not used to zone your skill/
personally you seem a kind guy, kinda guy i'd like to kill/

you aint no thug you a kid, should be reading comic magazines/
playing with your toys or your "DYNASTY SOILDIERS" figurines/

go back to bed, have a nap, how about some "milk and cookies"/
with a verse like that, id be ashamed, you don't belong with the rookies/

8 lines and i destroyed you didnt even need the extra 2
lets vote ppl

yo uppin for votes x1
needing some input

+ won this. He had punches and metas. yungs verse was whack. No real flow or hard punches. Jus played lines. keep elevating tho. Drop a honest vote or opinion here please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110047

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This battle was wack, but...

Yung Thug: Ur structure sucked. Matbe u should put it in lines, it's more effective that way. Ur punches were just ok. Decent wordplay. Keep comin' wit it.

<+>: Ur verse was decent. I just basically enjoyed it more. He took ya on punches, except for the with the vagina... had me rollin'. Nice creativity, wordplay, and metas.

Vote:<+>
Not every day do you see a newbie bring it to da table like dat. Keep rhymin'.

yo uppin for votes n coments here
any input appreciated