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Old 03-29-05, 09:17 PM   #76
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lol.. the records fake lol.. but thanks yo.. uppin for more positive feed.
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Old 03-29-05, 11:19 PM   #77
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closed no link..if you want this re-opend pm me a link
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Old 03-30-05, 07:12 PM   #78
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shyt.. i hate it wen ppl close this shyt.. w/e.. uppin
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Old 04-02-05, 01:37 PM   #79
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uppin...uppin...uppin...uppin...uppin...uppin...up pin...uppin...uppin...
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Old 04-02-05, 02:23 PM   #80
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Horrible Dreams


These illusions in my dreams are really full of confusion...
Un-Provin delusions of un-amusin images now un-loosened...
No time to re-joice, and sleep doesn’t seem to be a choice...
Too afraid to hear that voice that seems to never be destroyed...
Boredemness I avoid, but no matter what i’d loose and fall asleep...
In my dreams I’d fall too deep, I cant escape cuz im all too weak...
A never ending whisper, screams with children slowly crawling close....
Blood exposed, sliding out her eyes and nose with no surviving hope...
My legs restricted, not even my small fingers are able to be lifted..
My eyes not allowed to be shut, My life, not allowed to just live it....
I’d think at times the only way for it to disapear is to do suicide...
But every night its crystal clear that there’s no use to undo my life..
So i’ll just have to live with the sufferin and the horrible dreams...
N have people think I lived a happy life, wen that ain’t wut it seems...

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Wow that was hot. The multi's and vocab were a very big PLUS for you in this short piece. The imagery was amazing. the storyline was in depth and very realistic. I think the length was very appropriate for the topic. Short, sweet, to the point, but very complex. Good job Dab....8.5/10
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Old 04-03-05, 04:54 PM   #81
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haha shyt.. thanx for the feed yo.. uppin for more feed
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Old 04-05-05, 08:35 PM   #82
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Your Dope...
Needless to say anything...
Nice concept...
Imagery was nice...
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Old 04-07-05, 01:31 PM   #83
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lol thanx.... uppin
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Old 04-07-05, 06:46 PM   #84
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this was dope man, but I felt you coulda put more time, it needed to be a little linger, and the words in 2 bars were kinda messed up, if you took some more time this woulda been amazing no doubt, but it was very good though, I was feeling it, I actually dont find it was that deep, but it was good, 8/10

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Old 04-07-05, 11:18 PM   #85
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iight appreciate it man thanx.. ~1~
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Old 04-08-05, 12:25 AM   #86
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ahem... return the favor for your pal headgames
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Old 04-09-05, 12:26 AM   #87
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real nice piece dab, shit was clean....well put together...
definately shouldnt be slept on .....nice vocab n flow......
there was actually nothing i didnt like about it....huh...
damn,...you earned this............9.5/10
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stay up fam n keep dropping..............
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Old 04-09-05, 06:56 PM   #88
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hahahaha thanx yo...........
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Old 04-10-05, 04:44 PM   #89
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Old 04-10-05, 06:39 PM   #90
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lol wth?? didn't i just do that?? its jst called being patient yo
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