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Her Name was Africa...HOF!!!
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2313905 cracking The Hall of Fame wide open this ones for you drama Queen I know your a fan of these.. amongst the fallen leaves fell my dreams from the tallest tree of success tried my best to achieve, but the stares had me bare like arms absent of sleeves..with countless slurrs heaved at me, i stand mispercieved bystanders spittin insults result in me believing demeaning things..which made a ripple effect that excited the men of my generations like nipples erect.. makeshift men droped the rock that started the cycle of racisism.. decaying my mind set,a fascist gem..tossed into the lake of blood from slavery's winepress, to find it I just closed my eyes and took a step into the depth of arrested life ..what was left of myself before i submerged emerged to the surface a detested sight, while I or my soul waddle and roamed the legions of confined beings,plowing and sowing, rows and rows of triumphant peasants,that somehow or another found the life through death pleasant there I stood in heaven,my pity turned quickly to glee.. thinkin the debris of earth couldnt taint the beautiful black paint we obtained through birth..then before my eyes the rock stood the foundation of the temple of baal,the very rock that was slung into the berlin wall,before it fell.. the same rock that evaded the eighties.. desecrated our babies began a war that still rages on..The very meteor that Lucifer came on... I went to grasp it but as my hands claps there seemed to be a wave of over a billion gasp.. then piercing black sadness..suddenly a sullen errie detered me...a boy a black boy with black eyes blood teary ran up to me and in his eyes I could see.. that many things seperated him from me.. our eyes locked and I saw a child wrench from his mother on her forehead was AFRICA,the childs roots were smothered his ancestry was destroyed because he never knew his mother his sister,His brother.he didnt even know her name, nor her history her greatness was just a mystery.. he grew up strong and bold in a land not his own on a broad scarred back and strong hands he raised a strange placed a strange land that appeared to be everybodies,really it wasnt anybody's in this land as masculine as he was, he would always be seened as a child.not a king as he should be ,but a nusiance a worthless thing ..as our eyes unlocked it came to me that the child i was staring at was I, his pains were mine,his struggle was mine..His mother was MINE as i was washed up to the shore ignorance was no more, I knew who I was,who I would be in times to come, and who I was before.. I knew my people.. i knelt to the sanctuary of there hearts hardness, climb to the steeple and cast my self into there darkness Most of all I had a mother, once a orphan child of America serving several consecutive life sentences of imprisionment.. I knew my real mother her name was Africa..
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07-23-05, 02:15 AM
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07-23-05, 03:19 AM
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word is koo .. peeped this on hf before
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07-23-05, 02:33 PM
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thanx.....................
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07-23-05, 05:40 PM
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naw this is the TOPIC but i prolly dontknow cuz u used to reading garbage
ne wyas uppin...
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07-24-05, 02:44 AM
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07-24-05, 04:59 AM
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this shyt was alright....not HOF worthy....but ok
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07-25-05, 12:32 AM
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LOL^^^ ive seen your work before...
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07-25-05, 01:59 PM
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lmao...im slow...it honestly didnt register that yu were Spoken.....lol...Whats good fam?
Topic:..Killin them on it, fam....This was some creative stuff...HOF...definately...especially on here....ya know.... amongst the fallen leaves fell my dreams from the tallest tree of success tried my best to achieve, but the stares had me bare like arms absent of sleeves..with countless slurrs heaved at me, i stand mispercieved bystanders spittin insults result in me believing demeaning things..which made a ripple effect that excited the men of my generations like nipples erect.. iLL imagery...ya wording is so slick...love that... The emotion was iLL throughout...I kinda left my seat for a moment.... then piercing black sadness..suddenly a sullen errie detered me...a boy a black boy with black eyes blood teary again i love yur wording...out the norm...give yu that poetic feel.... Solid drop throughout....Pretty greesy...for ya surroundings....good job -AF-
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07-25-05, 03:25 PM
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damn some real feed
thanx alot fam!!!!
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