my rhymes are ~sharp and fittiled/
i bet even this ~part will leave u rittled/
my ~mind into these rhymes is wat i apply/
i sit back and un ~wind as i scream why to tha sky/
i wonder if my life is bein ~timed seein blury so i wipe my eye/
my rhymes are like ~some anti venom/
i repped where i was ~from then 6feet under is where i sent em/
wit these rhymes ~witch i continue to illustrate/
i'll have 5 in tha chest layin in a ~ditch is my fate/
this ~liquer and ~weed will be my downfall/
gettin fucked up ~quicker is wat i ~need thats all/
i got water to ~purify my veins/
u can ~vareify my tru colors when it rains/
my whole ~life is this pen and pad/
i grab tha ~knife and look forward to ten it's sad/
i might ~stumble but i will not fall/
i will ~rumble it dont matter how tall
i will ~fumble but i will not loose tha ball
watch yall ~crumble and have no remorse at all/
when i ~speak i do not have to explain/
fr0stie at his ~peek he cannot be tamed
yall have sprung a ~leek cause fr0stie bring rain/

it was pretty good for a rookie but it needs soem major improvement iight keep ti comin..........

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