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Old 05-06-06, 05:47 AM   #1
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From: Alosta City
Dervla vs. WillNova

IP: C966 3CBF


Rules: READ FIRST


Topics: make your choice


You and your opponent do NOT have to agree on the topic...


Pieces are DUE Thursday May 11

Voting ENDS Saturday May 13


Minimum line limit: 20

Maximum line limit: 50 (you can do more if your opponent agrees)


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Old 05-06-06, 08:28 AM   #2
Dervla
Poet's Daughter.
 
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Going for 30...........Check.

My Topic-

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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

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Old 05-07-06, 04:03 PM   #3
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Yup, checkin in, I'll do thirty, like that topic u picked too, lets run wit it.....
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Old 05-11-06, 08:37 PM   #4
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the lake of demise reflex its depths thru my eyes
hightide symbolize death, thas why we cry
withholdin pride, lettin the tears subside
perscribe that four lettered word that bears life
our fears lie in wat we don't know and change
any peculiar thing that can confuse the brain
I refuse to stray, I stay with cures and remedies
extort them mentally to endure my enemies
the lure they use to hinder me relys on sheer luck
ya cares crushed controllin the flow of tear ducts

emotions get harder to show the larger I grow
so pardon the cloves, as I'm sparkin the dro
a low margin controls who's martyred and stoned
leavin hearts exposed believin its smarter to fold
people barter fo gold, and get killed in the process
materials objects ruling or thoughts and use of logic
minds plottin injustice, theives retrieve and smuggle
beings intervene wit our dreams insuring the struggle
and ya act puzzled, like we ain't embark towards pain
eyes start to drain, bloodshot all marked by veins

political anarchy under a canopy
arranged maniacally so they tax us anually
they plan to seize our green to replace security
instead they ordain authority to keep our inferiority
destruction unmorally and label us minnorities
deport disorderly, but America invites us cordially
thas why we live plurally, cramped in housin projects
then take things injustly cram or mouths and pockect
lay 'em down and cock it, empty clips to the head
from birth to funerals theirs always tears to shed
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Old 05-13-06, 09:33 AM   #5
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My fault...Family business went down...Meeting and some serious arguements. I'll drop today, No joke.


DO NOT CLOSE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

Last edited by Dervla : 05-14-06 at 10:31 AM.
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Old 05-19-06, 06:03 PM   #6
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ayo, wat I don't understand is how u gon' vote on another battle before u drop up here. wow, lets get on to next weeks battle.... and I was reallie lookin forward to Dervla's insight.
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