Hazy - the drum sequence in this is aight. but it could still use sum crisper drums sounds n removin the bass from the hits would help in this regards. in my opinion the track is still not quite there yet though. needs a lot more added to the melody and maybe make it a bit slower.


Lights out - Sounds and styles r better on this than others you've done but it's not 4/4 timing or the samples are not in 4/4 so it sounds off. In other words, most beats u can cound 1,2,3,4. then it starts over. in this beat it's like 1,2,3 1/2, n then the loop starts again. i suppose beats don't have to be in 4/4 timing but my expreince is 99.9% r. Sumtimes this poses a problem cus u may have only have the first 1,2,3 1/2 of a dope sample or the sample is in sum wierd timing to begin with. either way u can't force it. shorten the sample maybe, so u can shorten the whole loop so it fits into a 4, 8, 16, 32, 64, etc. sequence.

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