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Old 08-05-03, 04:37 PM   #1
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Battle Verse ...just want feedback

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Like gynecologist check ups its funny how this pussy just finds me::
Comparing going second in golf and talent, Id have to say UT's behind me....(you tees)
Ill defines this Purple face guy , cause gagging on dicks has got u Breathless::
Taking away ya Pm's and Im's, no longer sharing rhymes.... has U defenseless::
Hot Purple Haze after the dust clears...... maybe after Blowing up Barney::
Swallowing ya last resort to get your text better got u throwing up car keys::
Spare Kidz from the drama so let me get straight to the Twist of the Plot::
Fuck the hand in the cookie jar, just let me catch u witt a Fist on the Spot::
Not Missed just Forgot, Cause fake idols get lost in the pages::
Ya usual Petofile status might b the way youll B One for the Ages::
Your like Induced labor for Twins the way u forcing those Multies::
After this battle youll have a crew of sic and unhappy .......Thrashing Revoltees::
A mix of a kick to the middle and this ^ ^ ^ has got this kid Crouchin in Pain::
Only way Purple sees Real colors is if I Gouge him with a thumb full off Paint::



Used against purple haze in UT regime crew battle he no-showed
plus he got the Boot....so just wanted some feedback.
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Old 08-05-03, 04:50 PM   #2
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Gynacolgist / pussy lines ive seen a couple times before, so their kinda played
UT's line had madd potential, if you worded that better it would of been dope!
Purple faced / breathless nice personal, should of made it into a punch rather than keepin it as a set up.
PMs & IM line, -ouch!- nice personal there cause i heard other people help him write his stuff too.
Blowing line, again, would of made for a pretty good line if you'd flipped it better, originality was there though.
Hand in the cookie jar line was nice, good multi use towards the end.
Forcing Multi's / Twins ive seen used before, but it wasnt a bad concept.
Real colours finisher was ok, again, could of been worded better for impact, but not bad.

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Old 08-05-03, 04:58 PM   #3
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^ Who the fuck are you to give feedback to other cats with 0-0 battle record ya homosexual!!
you are from england you never even saw a black person your idea of hip hop is craig david in x-boy pants lol look at ur avatar your a disgrace to rap leave this forums you fuckin waste of oxygen!







by the way nice verse bribeone
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Old 08-05-03, 05:07 PM   #4
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^ IM a vet here, been here since late 2000 / early 2001, all in all with my 3 alias, i have 6000+ posts at Rapbattles.com, if you took the time to fucking look - you'd realise im one of RBs best battlers, and i was 14-0 until i recently had my record re-set. Plus - im more of a topical / open mic head, a battle record DOSENT make you dope, not in the slightest, yes, im from england, but then again, your some ignorant fucking racist yank bastard that thinks ive 'never seen a black person' craig david is RnB - moron, do your research, go cop Roots Manueva, Jehst, Rodney P, Richochet Kalashnikov, their easily better than half the bullshit you listen to while poretending to be 'underground' and talking shit about MY avatar? Look at your you fucking herb, Crash bandicoot was dope in early 2000

like most of your pre school disses.

Now kindly let go of my dick you failed abortion.
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Old 08-05-03, 05:12 PM   #5
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Quote:
Originally posted by Camarac
Gynacolgist / pussy lines ive seen a couple times before, so their kinda played
UT's line had madd potential, if you worded that better it would of been dope!
Purple faced / breathless nice personal, should of made it into a punch rather than keepin it as a set up.
PMs & IM line, -ouch!- nice personal there cause i heard other people help him write his stuff too.
Blowing line, again, would of made for a pretty good line if you'd flipped it better, originality was there though.
Hand in the cookie jar line was nice, good multi use towards the end.
Forcing Multi's / Twins ive seen used before, but it wasnt a bad concept.
Real colours finisher was ok, again, could of been worded better for impact, but not bad.

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^ Who the fuck are you to give feedback to other cats with 0-0 battle record ya homosexual!!
you are from england you never even saw a black person your idea of hip hop is craig david in x-boy pants lol look at ur avatar your a disgrace to rap leave this forums you fuckin waste of oxygen!










wow someone is a homo with no clue of what they are talking about...your statement was completely disregarded once i saw that you were trying to use record as a means of degrading his reputation. here is some advice, www.urbanflows.net go there and never come back.....ever.


and also, you can bet that half the people here are white...and at least 10% from England you close-minded fuck.
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Old 08-06-03, 03:03 PM   #6
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Originally posted by Crash
^ Who the fuck are you to give feedback to other cats with 0-0 battle record ya homosexual!!
you are from england you never even saw a black person your idea of hip hop is craig david in x-boy pants lol look at ur avatar your a disgrace to rap leave this forums you fuckin waste of oxygen!








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lol black people live in england and u can be white latino black asian w.e to rap or know about battlin...dam ur ignorant...make this a legend so everyone can hate on this weak weak herb...

by the way ide rather be 0-0 then 1-3.....uppinn.....come on everyone lets diss this kid...i mean he clearly has no real life...now lets end his net life haha...

"here is some advice, www.urbanflows.net"-fck that...go to www.WaysToKillYourselfSlowly.com
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Old 08-06-03, 03:09 PM   #7
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Like gynecologist check ups its funny how this pussy just finds me::
Comparing going second in golf and talent, Id have to say UT's behind me....(you tees)
^^^i was a bit confused by this...but i get the point ur making

Ill defines this Purple face guy , cause gagging on dicks has got u Breathless::
Taking away ya Pm's and Im's, no longer sharing rhymes.... has U defenseless::
^^^ILL PERSONAL and funny top line

Hot Purple Haze after the dust clears...... maybe after Blowing up Barney::
Swallowing ya last resort to get your text better got u throwing up car keys::
^^^?

Spare Kidz from the drama so let me get straight to the Twist of the Plot::
Fuck the hand in the cookie jar, just let me catch u witt a Fist on the Spot::
Not Missed just Forgot, Cause fake idols get lost in the pages::
Ya usual Petofile status might b the way youll B One for the Ages::
^^^HAHAHA

Your like Induced labor for Twins the way u forcing those Multies::
After this battle youll have a crew of sic and unhappy .......Thrashing Revoltees::

^^^nice

A mix of a kick to the middle and this ^ ^ ^ has got this kid Crouchin in Pain::
Only way Purple sees Real colors is if I Gouge him with a thumb full off Paint::
^^werent mad on the finisher

sorry man if i didnt get those cuple of punches...but it was nice...hope it helps

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Old 08-06-03, 03:53 PM   #8
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ok.. how come mod's can post a battle in open mic and not get banned... that's fucked... if I did this it would say BANNED in big bold letters under my name,,,, I don't think this is fare... ne-way, not try'n to start ne-thing.. just wondering why you have special privliges?... peace
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