10-12 lines
u drop first
15 minutes
lets see what you got !!!!

iight

My rhymes higly amazin and incredible..................................//
I`ll eat ur rhymes up, I sure hope they`re edible...................//
When I battle I really deliver........................................... ...//
My verses so scary that they make u start to shiver..............//
This dude is really some bedlamite......................................//
Hes too crazy to battle and too crazy to fight......................//
I can read ur lame rhymes like a Dr.Suess book....................//
Ur no match for me,I can cut u up with a reap hook..............//
This dude is really fo sho unhinged....................................//
Calm down man ur really tryin to infringe............................//
But when u look at my rhymes they make u cringe..............//
Im u tear u up,Ur verses fill up one quater of a measurin cup//
DONE

Ur turn dawg.............................................. .

still dont know your 0 n 5, ya aint 5 n 0, YaYo,this unknown Skillz,
Steppin up, ya frontin these five, soon six killz, ya unshown skillzs

whats that? you couldn't rap better, even with pac's lyrical diary
thats wack,your rhyme are like HIV,making this lyricly sick to me

this guy is a laughing stock, no doubt in mind you ll neva be bought
worth tryin, not? see ill smoke n burn you, like all day i ll hit my pot

ya back track, bringing war, if ya taliban ill pop ya with my left hand
keep my right fo the afgan, smile and laugh, slapped wit a back hand

this guy goes home everyday to his right gurl? (palm)-ela (hand)-erson
stop writtin,ya playin,but lossin, yo records six, and wins stay at nuthin

too crazy to battle o fight?ya right ya dead on the streets o da mic
think you really see light,i stole it,allong with your pride and yo might


alright lets get some votes

Not a great battle...
It was pretty much a head to head joint but I vote skillz cause spitter rhymed skillz with skillz, and he rhymed hand with hand too. At least the other guy rhymes...

v/skillz

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uppin lets get some votes
still dont know your 0 n 5, ya aint 5 n 0, YaYo,this unKNown Skillz,
Steppin up, ya frontin these five, soon six killz, ya unSHown skillzs

It says unknown and unshown if you dint like it thats to bad that hand and hand ya right i never noticed oh well
lets still get some votes

1 2 3 4 5 need VOTES
any body gonna vote ?????????????????????????????????????????????..

unknown skillz verse
My rhymes higly amazin and incredible..................................//
I`ll eat ur rhymes up, I sure hope they`re edible...................//
When I battle I really deliver........................................... ...//
My verses so scary that they make u start to shiver..............//
This dude is really some bedlamite......................................//
Hes too crazy to battle and too crazy to fight......................//
I can read ur lame rhymes like a Dr.Suess book....................//
Ur no match for me,I can cut u up with a reap hook..............//
This dude is really fo sho unhinged....................................//
Calm down man ur really tryin to infringe............................//
But when u look at my rhymes they make u cringe..............//
Im u tear u up,Ur verses fill up one quater of a measurin cup//
I cant even break this down into sections...
unknown had virtually no punches and this structure is whack...
you gotta stop doin...................// aight elevate man....

bonespitter verse
still dont know your 0 n 5, ya aint 5 n 0, YaYo,this unknown Skillz,
Steppin up, ya frontin these five, soon six killz, ya unshown skillzs
whack and forced punch....
whats that? you couldn't rap better, even with pac's lyrical diary
thats wack,your rhyme are like HIV,making this lyricly sick to me
ok gettin better still not very good tho
this guy is a laughing stock, no doubt in mind you ll neva be bought
worth tryin, not? see ill smoke n burn you, like all day i ll hit my pot
references to drugs dont use them... that wus whack!
ya back track, bringing war, if ya taliban ill pop ya with my left hand
keep my right fo the afgan, smile and laugh, slapped wit a back hand
lol afgan... you werent really dissin him weak punchline
this guy goes home everyday to his right gurl? (palm)-ela (hand)-erson
stop writtin,ya playin,but lossin, yo records six, and wins stay at nuthin
Ander/nothin dont rhyme... the pam refernce wus funny tho but not much of a punch...

My vote-bonespitter his punches were better... if unknown had any at all...
and no im NOT in dnasty anyway check the sig unknown....
yall returnt he favor wit honest votes on my battles in sig... Pz...
_-SyaNidal-_

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uppin fo votes
im leavin for a couple hours hopefully there willl be a few more votes
............ .. . . . . . . . thanks

im back uppin still
need some votes
or let me no what you think of tha battle
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vote goes to skillz...better flow...more decent wordplay...and bone...you rymed the same thing twice on more than one occasion.

vote bone

unknown came really weak in this an i wasn't feeling his verse he just was blah nothing in his verse that hit hard atleast..

uppin need votes uppin fo vote##2
keep the votes commin

Trying everything once is easy
Its not getting hooked the hard part


Another battle last one today
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108140
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uppin votes needed come on ..............................//////////////////////////////////////////