ok no crew/votes
8-10 lines max
post due tomoro

ok i will spit 2moz morning aint got time now but u can spit now if u want, peace

ok i will spit 2moz morning aint got time now but u can spit now if u want, peace

Aiight...Signing In Shud Be A Good Battle....Good Luck!

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hey pimp hows it going ill make sure to vote on this when its ova just let me know...still looking for votes on our battle too this shit takin too long

ok checkin in..
my battle, http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123814

Terrorising ya eye balls just to see me "spit", these sulphuric words bounds to leave ya carcas "split"
wreckin ya "shit".. im bound to "blast", coz just like a needle in da but u a pain in the fukin "ass"
uppin the "class"..im lyrically "abdominable", team up wit lara croft coz dat the only way youll be a rap "chronicle"
lethal n "bionacal".. "decietfull" n on the "ball", i'll leave just like a mental patient, totaly of the "wall"
rap is to "cruel".. leave ya walkin wit a "gimp".. u just a played wannabe claiming to be a "pimp"
im walking on pavement u walkin on ice.. im permantley "rippin".. u just like a banna peel u straight "slippin"/

I Always FIND HOLES When Ever I Lace-Shit, Its Like A Just Vomited Cuz Ma Spit-Taste-Sick, Pimp Here To Set Da Pace-Quick Your Getting A Punctured-Face-Dick! And Your Verse Is Like An Ethiopians House….Cuz Da Structures-Basic/-3

Ma Punches Hit Internally Like A Kicking-Fetus, You Aint Got a Dick-Or-Penis
Am Leave U Holy A Bit-Like-Jesus, Got U Crossed When Ma Spit-Releases
Dawg Even If Ur Hand Was Glued To A Jigsaw Puzzle…U Still Couldn’t Pick-Up-Da-Pieces/-6

You Just “Surround Da Best” Kinda Like Pacs-Belt, Iam A Karate Chop Ya Like A Black-Belt And Send Ya Ass-To-Hell
You Hungry? Cuz Iam Gonna Crack-Shells…Ma Punches Have U Holding Your Nose Like Bad-Smells
Dawg Ya FLOWS SHIT…That’s Why Ur Called “BLACK-WELL”////-10 DAMN!!!!...KO


Aiight Vote Up

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aight pimp takes this
Pimp-You had better punches than black
But work on some punches and similies also the metaphores
balanced was stabled

blackwell-Work on everything thats all I have to say except for structure

v/pimp

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Ima have to agree with flows on this one.... While I think Pimp Rawb came pretty nicely and has very little to work on, except structuring his rhyme for the reader... I think that blackwell has a decent flow and a great structure but needs harder punches, and wordplay....I think this was a good battle though and I consider neither rhyme a waste of time for reading cuz blackwells structure makes his ish so easy to flow along and pimp had some funny punchlines....All in all i give this battle to Pimp Rawb though he was just more impressive to me here... Please return the favor with some honest votes.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124935

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whut he said..........

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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i'm votin for pimp rawb..his structure is a lil wak(maybe a lil more than that) but he flowed enough an his punches were def better..descent effort both tho..1