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Old 08-01-04, 11:03 AM   #16
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Aight Heres The Breakdown Puerto Your Structure And Flow Suck Fix It No Personals And Your Disses Were Weak But I Liked The Kanya Bar And I Aint Get The Luda Shit?still A Ok Verse.tek Your First Bar Was Hot But People Might Not Get It You Should Have A ()next To Wins That Says Winds In It.2nd Bar Also Hit Hard As For The 3rd That Sars Shit Is Played Out I Wish Niggas Would Quit That Shit And Your Ender Was Weak.your Flow Vocab And Struture Was Good Punches Good And Disses And Personals You Had None.
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