I'ma try to do this...it didnt' work last night...

10-20 lines....
u spit first...I'll spit within 2 days...almost definately sooner than 2 days though....
must explain votes

peace

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come at rapid-fire... like a rabid-geizer... grip ya throat wit savage-plyers
im a giant who'll attack-ya-empire and knock this hobbit back-to-tha-shire/
you couldnt have sharp ryhmes... if you chopped ya lines.. wit five butcher-knives
already killed this cat... nine times... took-ya-lives... lined em up and hooked-ya-spines/
but you still cant hang...BANG... thats tha sound when i punch in ya skull-n-splean
dislocate ya DNA... pull-ya-genes... gut you wit tha blades of woleverine/(avator)
you're battling tha Ne-Plus-Ultra*... blind you with tha venom of a king-cobra
rapid's so dumb... he clicked ALT on his keyboard and expected to see-Georgia/(where he lives)
homie-ryhme? nah i'll just pound ya face harder than chinease water-torcher
tha only-time... ya bars seen magic... is staring at a harry potter-poster/
Rapid Fire? listen kid my thick spits will clog-ya-nossel
im a grave digga aka tomb raider that'll rob-ya-fossels/
face it... you faded.. before you made it.. ya raps more outdated.. than a type-writer
ya punchlines couldnt draw niggas attention if they were laced with a high-lighter/

waiting on ya verse............... i already made a thread ............but we can use this one...............hurry ya spit up.............. like within tha next hour.... mine only took 30 mins.................peace

I WOULD do mine within the next hour...b/c it doesn't take me long to write a verse at all (30 minutes is actually longer than it takes me) but I dont' have time tonight....+ I'm not in the writing mood...I've had a shitty ass day, been madd busy, wrote a report..blah blah blah all kinds of shit...and wrestling is about to come on lol....I'll have my shit up tomorow tho unless something comes up..I'm just not in any mindstate to write a verse within the next hour...too much shit goin on...

peace

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ayo,

I'm insane with Vatican rhymes, leave u in pain when battlin//
maime this faggot bitch, he can't even explain his asterick//(check his 7th line)
I'll break ya bones, spit acid at u til ya face is gone//
look at his verse...my style must be creatin clones//
seein me in ATL is the only time this man gets 'DOME'//(georgia dome in atlanta)
I'll beat u to death like ya name was Nathanial Jones*//
u ain't makin it, only 'cum hard' when u 'raped with bricks'//
like you got diarreah with no style u droppin 'basic shit'//
put ya head to the barrel, n see how this glock feels//
pull out the 'SK', claim to be 'ILL' n u still ain't got 'SKILLS'//
u 'dread' me more than jamaican hair, n I did not stutter//
scared like u on a plane w/ arabs that got box cutters//
my rhyme's explosive, cause commotion, n ur's implosive//
I'm sendin u to Korea, cuz this 'kat got roasted'

^ click the link to fully get the line lol....

blah...I wrote this in about 15 minutes...I don't think I rushed it tho...I matched ur bars so w/e....

(*) Nathanial Jones is this dude that got beat to death by cops the other night....

let's get some votes

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4 votes were from banned people.. they dont count...

and one vote... didnt follow strobes new voting rules....

polls reset. word up.

wooooord

I thought that loss was bullshit...but oh well....I should get this now...but maybe not..who cares...lol

peace

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yo...VOTE

damn....not one vote in almost a week...this is gay as hell...

do I have to advertise for votes? lol

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please dont be scared to vote because he has a higher record than me and i won....lol....VOTE!!!!

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Haha,sorry took me so long to vote..I had to sleep..anyway I'll just vote this way..

punches: Both
flow: Rapid
enjoyed: Both
humor: Rapid
wordplay: Both
personnals: Kaos
voted for: Rapid

I cant vote in the poll though..i just need around 40 more posts which i should get by today,or tomorow c-ya

iight..make sure u poll vote man...cuz this shit needs to be done with, i'm tired of seein it lol

peace

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theory came wit nothin spactacular but his shit was ok...
It was wack hoe rapid feed off of theory's verse...
I think theory got it because off more consistant punched and the feeding...

v/Theory

guys, please return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107351&page=1

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H e n c e F o r w a r d

^ what kinda weak ass vote is that? u didn't even mention my verse besides talking shit about me for "playing off his verse"...idiot

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