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Song battle. Emcee must choose from list of song names below:

Still high
Why remain talking?
Who Am I?
They dont give a fuck
Destiny
I confess
Let the music
Revolutionary Warfare
Nothing Without You

I added some other topics cause I had some coo idea's about them. Goodluck

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Ysdat has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-06 03:34 PM.

Paranoid has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-06 06:59 PM.

www.soundclick.com/paranoid05

"Nothin' Without You"

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Who Am I?
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4721328&q=hi


Hi fi is better, take note SC fucks up my quality.. if you have trouble hearing it read along with the lyrics like church choirs.

Who am I?
Poet raised rough and raw the one you gaised up and fucking saw
Who are we?
seventh end rugged on the streets of massey never die we forever lasting

man who the fuck is this kid came out of now were
he came here to show fear
implanted in your chest like a breast implant
the best just cant confess this cunt
is a the opposite to a mondless drone
your time is gone
ill mold my own throne
fuck your feelings
record labels, we above your dealings
7th end productions boy!!
never end or giving a fuck you toy
underground emcees
about to clown if these
labels think we gone sign a deal
independant bro, signed and sealed
cant hustle the hustlers can you bro
hell mother fucking no
we gone blow
every week Ill show
who I am?!

Who am I?
Poet raised rough and raw the one you gaised up and fucking saw
Who are we?
seventh end rugged on the streets of massey never die we forever lasting


man, the way I shut dummys up, you think im'a ventrouliquist
ive been dead and its more than silent after life
I feel more comforatable after night
each time i grab the mic
i have to write somthing new from brain
fuck panadol,musics what i do for my pain
but who would just claim
they making moves when they not
resembling a tooth you will rot
Like dots with knifes, I abuse your spot
takes to seconds to flop
years to be established
our cares simply have vanished
who are we?
we aint no one great, we just like you
just some dudes
creating art on the mic

Who am I?
Poet raised rough and raw the one you gaised up and fucking saw
Who are we?
seventh end rugged on the streets of massey never die we forever lasting

Voted For: Ysdat

ysdat, your vocal qual is beat. some mixing would work wonders on your vocals lmao 'can you grow hair' lol. hook could have used another layer. your styles ok, not a whole lotta rythm in the rhyme scheme. song's okay. not stellar, but not anus either.

para, you took a hot beat and made it a not-hot song man. you could use a heaping serving of presence. your hook sounds more interesting than your verses. some parts sound like you're not even rapping over the beat, like you're jsut rapping on your own and pasted it over this beat. your rhymescheme is pretty basic and it sounds like you wrote this without a beat then tried to fit it over one.

battles liek this are always stupid on numerous levels to me because eyou're trying to compare apples to oranges with these different song types.

i'm just gonna look at execution and neither of you guys got it perfect, or close to perfect, but if i had to say one person outdid the next it'd be ysdat. all around more polished and his voice carried more emotion, sounded like he was more serious about what he was saying liek he believed it more.

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ok this is really wack... .

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honestly i think it would have been better if u chose the same topic..

you fuck suck dont bring that wack shit to the us fuckin wack job

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Voted For: Paranoid

This battle is really hard to try n compare....

because you both are going from two tottaly different directions...

i felt Paranoids joint alot more becase of my state of emotions....i liked Paranoids beat, went really good with the topic that he had...

I just wasn't feeling Ydats flow, or his topic at all....i can break it down more if you'd like me too....

hope you can return the favor in my text battle agaisnt Capo~Status

Good luck to both of ya

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wow man finally a random voter haha. thanks for that vote I'll hit your battle up right now cause im feelin generous today.

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My name was Don Of Mics btw......so that might makin lookin for it easier...

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