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Old 05-03-04, 08:26 PM   #1
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This rap ain't meant to be the shit,I just want yaw'll to know a little about me.Really im being straight up with what i'm saying and not trying to beef with no body.Yaw'll say i got potiental and what not maybe yaw'll can help me.This is just breif to tell yaw'll about me not my best or close to it.


I can tell a lot of yaw'll think what im spitten is lame,But it just lets me know i need to be improvin in my game,I was gone leave after a couple of downfalls,But a deceased sister of mine got me strong and standin tall,I'm probably the youngest but im ready to cope withcha,Even if a bitch lose im'a rematch until i getcha,When i stepped up in this game I thought i was the best,But all lies aside ain no TRUE emcee yet,Why?cause i see too many ain ready to take on,But don't take those words for granted if you wanna come on,But so young so many obstacles trough my mind,21 brothers and sisters and half of em doin time,In two months six of my fams done died,It was like a curse and still got my eyes open wide,I aint seen my mother in about 5 years,Nor my father and a bitch still sheddin tears,Livin wit a grandma who constantly sick,But I gotta do what it takes to survive in this shit,I aint low enough not to recognize a true deal,But i aint to big to take a lesson from an emcee thats real


On the serious side this wasn't to make yaw'll like me it's just being truthful but it would be cool to have some role model emcees.You can only learn from the best,If you don't like this or understand don't even waste yo time but a true and understanding emcee would be good to help me


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Old 05-04-04, 08:37 AM   #2
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i liked the verse, what u sayin seems real but u should really start writin in bars cause nobody wants to read something that looks like a paragraph, ya first bite was off like a mother fucka but this shit was aight, halla @ ya girl
ps. how old r u
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Old 05-04-04, 09:40 PM   #3
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Alright then stay up

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Old 05-05-04, 09:48 AM   #4
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lets get a battle
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Old 05-05-04, 10:20 AM   #5
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yo im a gurl 2 ok verse bcause it was deep yo how old r u??????????
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