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Old 05-12-04, 07:07 PM   #1
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Yo rappin is my occupation and its real like a bullet blazin you through ya
dome,
you can't touch me nor crush me cause im important like a tomb stone
I aint the best yet but im workin my way up
these other cats smart mouth like they can't be fucked up
And in the dictionary im in the listing as unknown
cause i be a mystery opinions is worshipped better than a king on the throne
I don't gotta be rhymin on gats and killin cats
cause im hot by speakin from the heart didn't you notice that
lil shorty was on hardtimes thats why a bitch rhyme
everyday struggle and hustle to make that doh half the time
But im through wit it,don't fool wit it,cause I got to much to take care of
And for my niggas who helped me this far i pay you back with my love
Many niggas thought i was the same and wasn't turnin out to be nothin
But now everytime i turn my head somebody need somethin
But i don't hesitate i could be cold hearted and keep my shit to myself
But loving is what i be before i be something else
I got a steady roof over my head money aint a problem no more
Don't mean it aint other struggles its always some more
But I'm happin i rhyme as a result of what i feel
And i finally reached the destination that i wished to fulfill


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Old 05-12-04, 09:42 PM   #2
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I just need feedback
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Old 05-12-04, 09:59 PM   #3
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well ive seen a lot of things from you...u should work on not makin it so simple and predictable...wordplay was aiight, flow was straight it was aiight just work on complexity....structure and vocab stay up ma 1
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