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Old 12-28-03, 03:16 AM   #1
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yte grl vs rellik

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im gonna start writin right now
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Old 12-28-03, 03:39 AM   #2
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we're both 14 but it dont matter im better than u/
u cant rap take ur dumb ass back to school/
check out this kids profile all it says is umm/
its not like he didnt want 2 fill it out he couldnt hes 2 dumb/
hes been on here 8 months and hasn't dropped 1 rhyme/
dont start now cause its my time shine/
leave the site u cant rap u dont belong/
who told u u could ur mom when u were rhymin 2 a nelly song/
u should battle people n ur own class/
cause i rhyme so fast u wont have time 2 react/
so be cautious like 50 and where a vest/
cause i'll crack ur ribs when my punches hit u n the chest/
ur a little bitch u aint worthy enough 2 battle me/
im not the best but even def kids have heard of me/
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Old 12-28-03, 03:59 AM   #3
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good closer, u fucked up a couple times tho "its my time shine" my time TO shine, and that other shit "who told u u could ur mom when u were rhymin to a nelly song" WHATTTTTTT???????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????? i think i know what u WANTED TO SAY
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Old 01-02-04, 10:49 PM   #4
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that was pretty weak...im hoping that rellik(who had my name before, i was Relik) drops something that much better or you both will be shot
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Old 01-08-04, 10:17 PM   #5
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shit i think that yte grl was pretty good. i give you props. fuck those other bitches. they just suck alot of cock. whatn can i say they probaly been in jail too long and turned gay
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Old 01-09-04, 12:27 AM   #6
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thanx joker,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,
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Old 01-09-04, 12:35 AM   #7
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good job yte girl i like that closer only problem i have with ur verse is u used alot of filler other than ithought u came at it pretty good.............................................. .................................................. ................................
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