let's try that again. twenty lines max, post within ten minutes of me.

Sorry bout the delay there, but i guess it's just more writing time for u.

They call him Mel-Man people, but nobody knows why,
It's the always offpoint, gay, mail delivery guy,
He's so lacking in the mind he made silent films for the blind,
And to unwind, he looked at drying paint and timed,
well, at least he's patient,
even if talent isn't obvioulsy latent,
No elegant examples of elegant eloquence,
just idiotic uniteresting experiments in irrelavance,
such a fool he's likely to hold ja rule in reverance,
as a talented rapper with phenomanal deliverance,
his momma's so fat she had to be winched out the bath,
the kinda large lady that eats as much as she can for a laugh,
and his pa, well one word rolls of the tip of the toungue,
somebody who's just a little too found of the young,
every dis is a miss for the delinquant little piss,
you know he aims to be as good as bis,
but comes of with all the finesse of a fist,
that's all there is and that's all there will be,
so think twice if you're not nice and can't deal with me,

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you got till 10.34 to post by the way, so please don't no show or something. hell, as long as you end up posting i'll give you till like 10.39.

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Man the king is back, I done paid dues to the game/
Nah a trick like you try to and disrespect my name//
Like a coward, thought I wasnt gone respond wita heavy shower//
Like the don I am, I will not loose/
So clap back if you choose/
I wont leave, I wont snooze/
Untill I put you in place/
You will not play my face/
Like Nas, I'll fuck up ya soul like ether/
You dirty hoe, you creature/
Comin wit rhymes like that, U must be a non nut hangin faggot/
Suck so many dudes thats why yo nickname is rabbit/
And like a rabbit, I make that ass hop/
Dont hah me take the mic off my hip, and squeezs out a shot/

right........ my nickname isn't rabbit..... oh well. hopefully some people will vote on his. i think that's up 1. takes like 5 votes to end it i think.

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Aight, no beef though right? I mean its just a battle right. Cause its yo call if you wanna ball, I'ma soldier niggih, I neva fall

he he. indeed. no point having beef over a battle in words. it's all intelectual after all. that's up 2 for me.

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what the hell, i'll up it again. that's three. 3 33333333 in fact. just so it let's me post. asshole machine saying i need 100 characters. what kinda bullshit is that? well, looking at it, probably bullshit that serves a purpose. hmm.....

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