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Old 10-04-04, 01:54 AM   #16
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Old 10-04-04, 01:57 AM   #17
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i dont know what oreo was thinkin:

oreo: white and black rhymes seem to have played the role of a horrible collab. but keep ya head up, there will be easier bucks to tackle soon enough. ya rhymes are just a tad played, ya good though, ya recovery isnt too far off. just add some decent punches, some up to date structure and ya good. keep elevating buddy.

a'poc: ya keyed on the better half of this battle, ya had a killer opening, the closure was honestly rusty, but ya structure and wordplay were beautiful. nice punches especially for a person who hasnt battled in a decade. its good to see your out there battlin again, just dont catch me with an open slot. haha.

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Old 10-04-04, 02:24 AM   #18
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k i hafe to vote honest i think ggenius won apoc or w/e long ass name oreo needs elavation tho but still good in all but not feelin his verse:

oreo:
k you came hard one of yer best ive heard from you but you aint good enouhg to beat apoc hes to good for you and more skilled hes a vet no fuckin with a vet lol a lil vocabulary from you but not to much i seen but try and work on wordplay and stucture they were off badly specialy structure and flow.

apoc:
k you took this man with ease lol you had way better flow and wordplay, punchlines nicely played. oreo got badly played but you need work on vocab it need serious work but you still better then me no doubt about that.........

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Old 10-04-04, 06:17 AM   #19
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...Apocalypse... advances because Oreo will be banned.
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