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Old 07-23-04, 09:29 PM   #1
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3. Apotheosis 'vs' 6. Darklight

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Old 07-24-04, 11:34 AM   #2
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safe...good luck Dark.
 
Old 07-24-04, 06:16 PM   #3
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Checkin' in... Good luck, Apotheosis.
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Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 07-30-04, 09:45 AM   #4
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134817

Saw this trannies picture…the laughter I had was intense,
Ur hearing & site is doing alright…ur just handicapped w/ ur dress sense.
Kid your seriously wack…& renowned for weak drops,
& judging but that denim…you’ll need an IOU to take cheap shots.
You’re the weirdest fuck…a mix of gender type being,
& similar to nervous car vandalists he’ll break a sweat when keying.
With a nasty mug like that…its destined 4 the wall of shame,
& thank “God” DarkLights rhymes to his ego…is a contradiction like his name.
unlike ya sweaty face…kid…ur wack rhymes will never shine,
& ur only 14…….but look about 45……..…………………………..
………………………………………… ………………………………………
………………………………………… …inches around the waistline.
I aint gonna get scientific…coz dumbass u wudnt get what I mean,
but fuck ur mothers nose…or ur papas eyes…………………………………
………………………………………… …………..only ugliness is in ur jeans.
 
Old 07-30-04, 11:02 PM   #5
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Aight, check it...
This herb always brings up the rear, spends his life under the covers
Apo drops more periods than a rehab center for crackhead mothers
Won't catch me upset, this here ain't what they call a fighter's shock
When God matches up against a moderator with fuckin' Writer's Block
Heh, bathroom break, but you won't see Apotheosis using the Men's
Only way to get a view of the BS in his head is thru his contact lens
Matched hgimself with his maker, well that was Mr. Mod's 1st mistake
Apo's been headin' down dead end road all his life without the brakes
Apo talks a big game, claims dopeness and luck with all the femmes
But then his own self-image includes four fuckin' limbs on an M & M
You almost came on crap, then crap came on u, but I'm not scornin' it
Sad when a leader gets knocked out the first round of his tournament
Royce just wanted to Roll with the big boys, but he forgot his liscense
And RapVerse ain't seen a bigger disaster since the Cuban Missle Crisis!
Later
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 07-30-04, 11:34 PM   #6
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hmm..

this battle was almost even..

apo:had a few funny personals about how he look.. (LMAO at his picture)..aight.. i saw a few ncie ones in there..overall 7.3/10 verse..


Darklight/God:i was actually surprised.. i thought you just a herb hehe.. but i was actually feelin the flow and like a few lines...:
This herb always brings up the rear, spends his life under the covers
Apo drops more periods than a rehab center for crackhead mothers
^nice bar

Won't catch me upset, this here ain't what they call a fighter's shock
When God matches up against a moderator with fuckin' Writer's Block
^nice rhyme scheme..aight punch

Apo talks a big game, claims dopeness and luck with all the femmes
But then his own self-image includes four fuckin' limbs on an M & M
^lol

You almost came on crap, then crap came on u, but I'm not scornin' it
Sad when a leader gets knocked out the first round of his tournament
^that was good

apos lines i felt:
Saw this trannies picture…the laughter I had was intense,
Ur hearing & site is doing alright…ur just handicapped w/ ur dress sense.
^flow was off.. Personal was decent.. that pic was hilarious tho..

Kid your seriously wack…& renowned for weak drops,
& judging by that denim…you’ll need an IOU to take cheap shots.
^second line was good..

Vote: Ima have to go with Dark on this..his flow and consistancy was a lil more impressive than Apo's... i would expet you to know that this isnt a Hate vote...
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Old 07-31-04, 03:22 AM   #7
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I wont bitch about it but

#2- Line Limit

Round 1: 12
Round 2: 14
Round 3: 16
Round 4: 18


u went 2 lines over the limit. 1-0 2 DarkLight.
 
Old 07-31-04, 03:23 AM   #8
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oh..in that case he DQ'd
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Old 07-31-04, 03:24 AM   #9
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Nah I dont wanna win like that...its only 2 lines....if he had the better verse then he shud move on its only 2 lines.
 
Old 07-31-04, 03:30 PM   #10
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^^ See thats what we need at RV right there.. someone who doesnt give a fuck.. he wants the better guy to win.. which is good to see for once.. rather then HE WENT OVER THE LIMIT.. its a DQ..

Ill vote up later..
 
Old 07-31-04, 03:50 PM   #11
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Saw this trannies picture…the laughter I had was intense,
Ur hearing & site is doing alright…ur just handicapped w/ ur dress sense.
LOL....man,that pic really did it for me...u were halfway to winning just by posting it alone

Kid your seriously wack…& renowned for weak drops,
& judging but that denim…you’ll need an IOU to take cheap shots.
LOL...YEP....I KEEP LOOKIN AT THE PIC,N READIN THIS,N I'M DYING

You’re the weirdest fuck…a mix of gender type being,
& similar to nervous car vandalists he’ll break a sweat when keying.
I DIDNT LIKE THIS

With a nasty mug like that…its destined 4 the wall of shame,
& thank “God” DarkLights rhymes to his ego…is a contradiction like his name.

DIDNT LIKE THIS EITHER

unlike ya sweaty face…kid…ur wack rhymes will never shine,
& ur only 14…….but look about 45……..…………………………..
………………………………………… ………………………………………
………………………………………… …inches around the waistline.
RRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFLLLLLL LLLLLLLLL...THAT IS THE FUNNIEST SHIT I'VE SEEN IN WRITER'S BLOCK

I aint gonna get scientific…coz dumbass u wudnt get what I mean,
but fuck ur mothers nose…or ur papas eyes…………………………………
………………………………………… …………..only ugliness is in ur jeans.
LOL...THAT WAS AIGHT
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Aight, check it...
This herb always brings up the rear, spends his life under the covers
Apo drops more periods than a rehab center for crackhead mothers
WELL....DROPS MORE PERIODS...N PREGNANT MOTHERS OR SOMETHING WOULD GO.....BUT THE REHAB N CRACKHEAD PART,WAS REALLY UNECESSARY,N JUST MADE IT GAY N FORCED

Won't catch me upset, this here ain't what they call a fighter's shock
When God matches up against a moderator with fuckin' Writer's Block
UMM...ITS OK,DECENT PLAY ON WORDS...BUT IT DIDNT BLOW ME AWAY THAT MUCH....

Heh, bathroom break, but you won't see Apotheosis using the Men's
Only way to get a view of the BS in his head is thru his contact lens
HUH? THATS JUST FUCKIN GAY

Matched hgimself with his maker, well that was Mr. Mod's 1st mistake
Apo's been headin' down dead end road all his life without the brakes
GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
THIS IS WHERE UR AGE SHOWS...THATS FUCKIN WACK



Apo talks a big game, claims dopeness and luck with all the femmes
But then his own self-image includes four fuckin' limbs on an M & M
HUH? WTF? ................RETARDED IS ALL I CAN SAY ABOUT THAT LINE

You almost came on crap, then crap came on u, but I'm not scornin' it
WTF IS THIS KID BABBLIN ABOUT
Sad when a leader gets knocked out the first round of his tournament
NOTHIN THERE

Royce just wanted to Roll with the big boys, but he forgot his liscense
SPELLIN IT RIGHT WOULD HELP? N I DOUBT U HAVE URS CUZ U DONT LOOK OLD ENOUGH,SO IT KILLED UR EFFORT

And RapVerse ain't seen a bigger disaster since the Cuban Missle Crisis!

THIS,WAS JUST FUCKIN GAY.................WACK.....LAME....WHATEVER U WANNA CALL IT....WTF DOES THE CUBAN MISSLE CRISIS HAVE TO DO WITH RAPVERSE? ABSOLUTELY NOTHING.....N U TALKIN BOUT BIGGER DISASTER,N THAT...ITS STILL FUCKIN LAME......BUT U USED RAPVERSE IN THERE IT THREW IT OFF N MADE IT LOOK GAYER

COMMENTARY: APO KILLED THIS KID.....THE PIC,CLOWNIN HIS LOOKS,CLOTHES....WEIGHT.....EVERYTHING HE KILLED HIM....CALAMITY,I DUNNO WHAT U WERE THINKIN,THIS IS REALLY A NO BRAINER....THAT WAIST LIKE.....I WAS FUCKIN DYING.......................N GOD....THAT NAME,IS FUCKIN LAME,2 PPL ON MY OLD BOARD HAD IT ALONE.........I THINK U'RE OUT OF PLACE IN THIS TOURNEY

VOTE=APO...HANDS DOWN
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Old 07-31-04, 11:20 PM   #12
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Do I know you from the old RB? Cause you seem to have some hate towards me. It was a good battle on both sides, no need to be talkin' all that shit. I ain't do nothin' to you.

Oh, and by the way, I'm not one to bitch, but saying he halfway had this just by posting a link to a pic sounds a little bit like D/R.

I don't know you, I don't know where all the hate is from, but the score is 1-1.

Great battle, Apotheosis.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 08-01-04, 04:51 PM   #13
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I'm not voting on this, i've been accused enough of d/r for now.
 
Old 08-01-04, 05:35 PM   #14
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If ur vote is truly honest, it doesn't matter who you vote for. If ur gonna be stupid like Latin Kitten, you probably shouldn't vote. Score is 1-1.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 08-01-04, 09:09 PM   #15
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Apo
Saw this trannies picture…the laughter I had was intense,
Ur hearing & site is doing alright…ur just handicapped w/ ur dress sense.
Came across as awkword to me, personally. Not a good opener.
Kid your seriously wack…& renowned for weak drops,
& judging but that denim…you’ll need an IOU to take cheap shots.
haha, funny shit. Funny punch. That's all there is to it.
You’re the weirdest fuck…a mix of gender type being,
& similar to nervous car vandalists he’ll break a sweat when keying.
I could see the concept you were going for, but it just didn't pan out in this one.
With a nasty mug like that…its destined 4 the wall of shame,
& thank “God” DarkLights rhymes to his ego…is a contradiction like his name.
Bit of a personal there, an average bar for you.
unlike ya sweaty face…kid…ur wack rhymes will never shine,
& ur only 14…….but look about 45……..…………………………..
………………………………………… ………………………………………
………………………………………… …inches around the waistline.
Shizzam, another funny personal.
I aint gonna get scientific…coz dumbass u wudnt get what I mean,
but fuck ur mothers nose…or ur papas eyes…………………………………
………………………………………… …………..only ugliness is in ur jeans.
I wouldn't have said 'Only'... just kept it as 'ugliness is in your jeans.' Despite that, it was a funny personal again

Your verse was good for the most part. Some stand out personal, which could likely win you the battle at this point.


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This herb always brings up the rear, spends his life under the covers
Apo drops more periods than a rehab center for crackhead mothers
Sorry man, put this bar was very played. I expect that you knew that, but geez...
Won't catch me upset, this here ain't what they call a fighter's shock
When God matches up against a moderator with fuckin' Writer's Block
This was kinda cathcy to me. Sounds like something you would typically hear in audio format, but I like it none the less.
Heh, bathroom break, but you won't see Apotheosis using the Men's
Only way to get a view of the BS in his head is thru his contact lens
Set-up, was kinda imature - for lack of a better word. The punch was an interesting concept, something i've never seen. I'll give you some credit for originality.
Matched hgimself with his maker, well that was Mr. Mod's 1st mistake
Apo's been headin' down dead end road all his life without the brakes
Cool wordplay thrown in with a light personal. Again, I like it.
Apo talks a big game, claims dopeness and luck with all the femmes
But then his own self-image includes four fuckin' limbs on an M & M
I don't get it. Sorry, I just don't.
You almost came on crap, then crap came on u, but I'm not scornin' it
Sad when a leader gets knocked out the first round of his tournament
You're trailing off here kid.
Royce just wanted to Roll with the big boys, but he forgot his liscense
And RapVerse ain't seen a bigger disaster since the Cuban Missle Crisis!
I really doubt anyone here was around during the Cuban Missle Crisis, and half would have no idea what that was. This is another line that I could only shrug my shoulders at and say 'that's okay'.

'Okay', pretty much sums up your verse. Latin ripped you pretty hard on it, but i won't go that far.


Vote- Apo, he made me laugh out loud with the waistline punch, and I strongly think he dropped the better verse.

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