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Old 02-07-07, 08:33 PM   #1
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Movie Character Battle: Tony Brown vs. Artistik

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Tony Brown as MIKE LOWERY


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Artistik as MARCUS BURNETT


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Old 02-07-07, 09:25 PM   #2
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check

match me cuz ima drop first... lol
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Old 02-08-07, 11:06 PM   #3
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Tony Brown is showing, I can assure you of that.

Just so you know, he is just too lazy to check in he said, lol.
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Old 02-08-07, 11:52 PM   #4
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gonna cut to the chase, ur really will smith, n this is our second movie so o' well
cuz bitch the closet you got to an oscar.. was doing his fuckin voice on sharktale
bad boys II was the title right, but for some odd reason i consider you a groupie
shit.. you even had them steal my real life initials for your name in the movie
ok so you banged my sister, big deal, but i'm already way ahead of you mate
cuz i let sydney u in ya grill, jus to see the knee of gabrial, union wit mikes face
you suck at life fagget, shot me in the ass, and the sad thing that's worst..
is i was in the persuit of happiness.. till u went an posted up your verse
keep ur hands to urself lowery, all up in the video store, puttin on an act
cuz anytime i see mike strahan reaching.. i bet he's going for the sack

still 10... edited diff lines tho
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Old 02-09-07, 11:54 AM   #5
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I been pretty, aint a damn thang changed in Bad Boys II
Im still a pimp foo, n ya wifey STILL got u whipped dude
Get outta my business, duke ya sister + Mike is fa sure
Truth is, Sydney's mine. u just mad cuz im stylin on HER
You got a face thats bloody dry, and im fulla temptation
While Marcus the funny guy....who fucks up the investigation
Ya lazy fuck, im the one who hits it on the nail, sir
Your forever behind the scenes, shit u ARE the movie trailer
See im makin long green, s' sorta like this a par 10
Wanna talk about the past? ok, whats the last movie YOU starred in?
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Old 02-09-07, 11:52 PM   #6
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uppin so u know i posted
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Old 02-10-07, 12:05 AM   #7
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Artistik:

ok so you banged my sister, big deal, but i'm already way ahead of you mate
cuz i let sydney u in ya grill, jus to see the knee of gabrial, union wit mikes face
you suck at life fagget, shot me in the ass, and the sad thing that's worst..
is i was in the persuit of happiness.. till u went an posted up your verse


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I been pretty, aint a damn thang changed in Bad Boys II
Im still a pimp foo, n ya wifey STILL got u whipped dude
Ya lazy fuck, im the one who hits it on the nail, sir
Your forever behind the scenes, shit u ARE the movie trailer
See im makin long green, s' sorta like this a par 10
Wanna talk about the past? ok, whats the last movie YOU starred in?



Close battle.. at first i was gonna vote for Art but that closer could have been a lot better. for that fact the opener coulda been better also, i felt where you were going but it just wasnt wrote too well.. i feel tony was a bit more creative in his last 2 bars and thats what got him my vote.


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Old 02-10-07, 01:21 PM   #8
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Cool battle n all..

Artistik
gonna cut to the chase, ur really will smith, n this is our second movie so o' well
cuz bitch the closet you got to an oscar.. was doing his fuckin voice on sharktale
Ok, but your suppose to be going at "Mike Lowery" not the real Will.

bad boys II was the title right, but for some odd reason i consider you a groupie
shit.. you even had them steal my real life initials for your name in the movie
Decent, was creative, and on topic

ok so you banged my sister, big deal, but i'm already way ahead of you mate
cuz i let sydney u in ya grill, jus to see the knee of gabrial, union wit mikes face
Flow was choppy on second line, didnt really get it..

you suck at life fagget, shot me in the ass, and the sad thing that's worst..
is i was in the persuit of happiness.. till u went an posted up your verse
Ok ill give you that, not to bad

keep ur hands to urself lowery, all up in the video store, puttin on an act
cuz anytime i see mike strahan reaching.. i bet he's going for the sack
I liked it, couldve been worded differently to but still hit, that is if it was meant in the context i presumed you meant it as.

Overal - Not to bad, went off topic a bit since you were suppose to be going at the Character Mike Lowery and not Will Smith, but you had some ok punches and personals, flow was decent.

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I been pretty, aint a damn thang changed in Bad Boys II
Im still a pimp foo, n ya wifey STILL got u whipped dude
Good opener, was personal and it hit nicely.

Get outta my business, duke ya sister + Mike is fa sure
Truth is, Sydney's mine. u just mad cuz im stylin on HER
Decent, flowed ok

You got a face thats bloody dry, and im fulla temptation
While Marcus the funny guy....who fucks up the investigation
Was ok, not a hard punch but it works

Ya lazy fuck, im the one who hits it on the nail, sir
Your forever behind the scenes, shit u ARE the movie trailer
Ok
See im makin long green, s' sorta like this a par 10
Wanna talk about the past? ok, whats the last movie YOU starred in?
Punch hit but it was out of the context of gettin at Marcus Burnett

Overal - Had the stronger punches of the two of ya's, your punches and verse in general was more direct to getting at the Character Marcus Burnett as you were suppose to.


Vote - Tony Brown (Tony Tone, W/e)

Reason - Had stronger punches and personals that were directed as they shouldve been, both flowed alright but parts of Artistiks got a lil choppy.
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Old 02-11-07, 01:38 AM   #9
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art:
gonna cut to the chase, ur really will smith, n this is our second movie so o' well
cuz bitch the closet you got to an oscar.. was doing his fuckin voice on sharktale
you suck at life fagget, shot me in the ass, and the sad thing that's worst..
is i was in the persuit of happiness.. till u went an posted up your verse

vs.

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I been pretty, aint a damn thang changed in Bad Boys II
Im still a pimp foo, n ya wifey STILL got u whipped dude
Ya lazy fuck, im the one who hits it on the nail, sir
Your forever behind the scenes, shit u ARE the movie trailer
See im makin long green, s' sorta like this a par 10
Wanna talk about the past? ok, whats the last movie YOU starred in?

I give this battle to tony for sure, he had the better verse in this battle. He whored the hell out of will smith. Art your verse was decent, but your punches wernt as hard as tony's were in this battle.
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Old 02-11-07, 10:29 PM   #10
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Artistik:
gonna cut to the chase, ur really will smith, n this is our second movie so o' well
cuz bitch the closet you got to an oscar.. was doing his fuckin voice on sharktale
bad boys II was the title right, but for some odd reason i consider you a groupie
shit.. you even had them steal my real life initials for your name in the movie

^you really werent dissing the dude you were supposed to. you were just shittin on Will Smith. Which is fine with me, but it kinda took away from the point of the battle.

Tony:
Ya lazy fuck, im the one who hits it on the nail, sir
Your forever behind the scenes, shit u ARE the movie trailer
See im makin long green, s' sorta like this a par 10
Wanna talk about the past? ok, whats the last movie YOU starred in?


I fely where Brown was going...down the toilet. No, jk. But anyways, I saw and appreciated that you were actually dissing the correct person, but they werent that great. The last two bars were ya best, but that was it really. Nothing else really to speak of. Ya had shit that mighta gone somewhere, but due to wording and set-up problems, didnt.
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Old 02-11-07, 10:56 PM   #11
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Old 02-12-07, 12:19 AM   #12
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oh, btw i just aint wanna no show n be all gay about it,..... but tony already kno's i quit textting... so he wins either way cuz i be signing out
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Old 02-12-07, 05:12 AM   #13
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i felt artistiks opener was off...like holmes said, it was sorter hitting at will smitth, not lowery...it was ok tho, i just wasnt feeling it as much as tonys...tony defiantely came much harder with his verse, chatting about how his wifey got him STILL whipped, but still, he wasnt all that either imo...but my vote gos to tony, coz he stayed on point, and i felt he came harder....

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Old 02-12-07, 10:54 AM   #14
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oh, btw i just aint wanna no show n be all gay about it,..... but tony already kno's i quit textting... so he wins either way cuz i be signing out


yea but, you've said that who knows how many times now n so have i. nobody actually does lol
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Old 02-12-07, 07:55 PM   #15
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i just gave away the fl title and the LLL title on rb.... like i said i quit


seeing what's good with the iba on pr..... maybe 1-2 punch on here...... werd
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