RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 10-18-03, 11:59 AM   #1
ImpressionNist
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
ImpressionNism..is like this =P

IP: 6236 079F

Burn-the-text, I got you chasin me, like u got-an-urge-for-sex
DiverseSyndicate? This is my-verse-u-idiot..
Got yo-ass on lockdown, u ma first target...Steppin on ya with de-feet (defeat) like you was a carpet
they call me a.k.a. Poseidon, you-over-there hidin while i'm here holdin his-trident...you mind it?
you spittin-illeterate-shit, my words-are-tense, got u in suspense, livin a scence hypnotizin ure eyes quicker then MrsCleo with lies
aint-no-fish-in-this-sea, resist-bein dist make ya-slit-ya-wrist cuz of me..

I got you cramped-and-stamped up like pancakes
leave-you-starved..like little kids with-blank-plates

Pz eZ 1
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-03, 12:14 PM   #2
Ghostfacekilla
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 59C9 D0CA

that was mad tight yo!
big upz

"mean muggin aint nottin but a disgrace unless u bring ya ghostface"
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-03, 04:59 PM   #3
ImpressionNist
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 399E F0FD

ghost, u ready for a crew?
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-03, 05:07 PM   #4
e.coli
Can u beat me?..Hell No
 
Posts: 1,001
Joined: Oct 2003
From: Da X
Status: Offline
Text Record: 19-10
IP: 4577 CD9A

this was an ok verse but u need to shorten up some of your bars they were a lil long at times. other than that this was a good verse my nigga. keep elevatin

holla
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:23 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.