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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

damn man really nice flow.....good useage of multis and vocab liked it a lot man....9/10

return the feed on my OM's
and this one
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161571

peace~1

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hot shit right there...nice rhymes good flow..but you limited ya self by only rhyming one word..still hot peep mines the hit em up...8.5/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155449

drop some feed on that!

thanx 4 da feed yo<>uppin.....

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!

This was a tight flow, But some of them things u said make u look conceded man, But overall Nice ass flow.....9/10

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lmao, ya i see how you can feel that...
i wrote it as a self glorification piece...
never done it b4...sooo i thjought id try it...
thanx fo the feedback....

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!

dope verse fam i was feeling all the wordplay got tongue tied a couple of times though lol.. should collab sometime 9/10

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wow. I don't read text much cause I'd rather listen to the audio, but this was real nice man. Good looks. I dunno how you gon spit this - it's almost too much, but for a lyrical written - it's hot. Cat's better not sleep - this is one hot jam. Try and get away from mentionin your name so much, and just let them know you're talkin bout you. They know already - just speak it man. Nice drop.

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tongue twisters sound nice on audio.. i would seriously consider puttin' this to audio.. it's really nice..

All the countless measures I take to insure, Each verse's better than the last you heard,
In otherwards rest assure I'm the best for sure, Believe it or not because it is absurd,
I'm disturbed like the next door neighbors in the movie The Burb's,blaintent Blasephemer,
Who'll trap your pastor inside of a herse, swerve n crash into your family's church,
While he suffers from 3th degree burns,
^all that up there was real creative, very nice fa real... good luck with this..

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Why you haven't been nominated yet i'll never know...but this was most def a dope piece...the rhyming was off the chart you def got skillz at writing shit flowed was a lil stetched but flow made up for that wordplay dayum to put it simple was dope...i'd give this an 8/10 this was most def a good piece keep droppin bombs

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R.I.P OMB

To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this piece fire.flow was outrageous.good drop.9.5/10.keep em comin'

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

uppin this for feed yo.................!

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!

...........................................^^^

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!