hey i forgot to put this in there pleez pleez hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108052

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Nuff Said

hey some of you forgot to poll vote wtf
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113287

hey did you guys even poll vote?
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113287

Opener - Thing (snypz was so played out)
Structure - Thing
Vocab - Thing (snypz used basic words)
Punches - Thing
Closer - Thing

Snypz all ya shit is played, u can tell. Your second bar was the best, and if you could keep consistant wit punches that hit as hard as that then you probly could have won. but you didnt. Thing took this with punches and structure and simply just a better verse.

Vote - Thing

thing got this for better pucnehs and a well organized verse

weezy came weak and it showed as thing beat him in every category

his punches hit harder but it was an ok battle

v/thing

hit up the front lines battle in my sig
when u get 100 cuz i hit this up

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Punches: Thing
Wordplay: Neither
Personals: Weezy
Multis: Neither
Opener: Thing
Closer: Thing

Vote - Thing

Your Verse Had The Consistancy Of Uglyness Just Like Tar
Best line

Both need to add a couple more punches, but decent battle.

Could you hit up an honest vote in my sig, it's mad slept on.

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I rhyme better than who rhymes better than you

i expected more from this

snypz- your verse was to simple, i wasn't feeling your punches....

thing- you took his with punches and a better verse alround

simple break down no need to really get technical

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PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

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weezy
Listen... Ya rhymes out of date so they gettin' expired/
Your Words couldn't get hot if I set 'em on fire/
played, 4/10

Call me dragon only thing that im Spittin' is flames/
This cat should lose, For the simple fact "THING" is his name/
first line wakc, second decent attempt, 5/10

out of commission my punchlines should be call knock out lines/
one personal hit 'em hard put him out for some time/
too simple, 5/10

yeah i know 0-3 my record isnt the best/
But you wouldn't know you was speakin' bull if it took a shit on your chest/
filler, hardly a punch 4/10

You in the worst state your plot is thickenin' quick/
you'll pack in a casket like a box of chicken wings/ HOLD DAT!!!(sike)
yeh this ryhmed, 3/10

overall 21/50

you came soft, hardly anything hit, jus keep elevating kid!!



thing
You Say Your From "Where Ever You Not From...But Why
Shits So Incohearent That You Should Just Simply Die
pretty weak, 4/10

Kid Trys To Make His Verse Look Better By Adding A "/"
But Thats As Herbish As Thinking You Could Win A Thing
first line was a decent attempt, 5/10

I'mma Disinagrate Ya Roots From the Herb Garden Then Sing
So Now When You Try To Survive You Wont Cuz No Soil
aiight, 5/10

Your Worst Than A Rich Famalies Daughter...So Spoiled
This Horrible Addtrosaty Hasent Even Won A Single Battle
weak, 4/10

And This Fact Literally Stays The Same As I Complete My Bar
Your Verse Had The Consistancy Of Uglyness Just Like Tar
again weak, 4/10

overall 22/50


you had a big structure problem, then jus fix that an elevate!!


my vote thing


plz hit up the battles in my sig, one or the other, thanks

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Punches: weezy
Wordplay: Neither
Personals: Weezy
Multis: Neither
Opener: weezy
Closer: weezy

Vote - weezy


yo Thing yours didnt make any sense man think before you spit

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<b><table style=filter:GLOW(color=white)>I JUST DONT GIVE A FUCK </table></b>

<b><table style=filter:GLOW(color=red)>No sig is fucken needed aiight cunts</table></b>

Weezy- Try to avoid using the "/". Ur punches didn't hit hard at all. It was like two set ups in each bar. Ur only decent line was the "THING" line, where you attempted wordplay and a personal. Try 2 incoorparate thos things into every line.


Thing- Ur verse was decent. It had its moments, the beginner I wasn't feeling at all, definately a filler. I liked the soil line a lot, showed nice wrodplay there. You went for a lot of witty punches, but sometimes it was almost forced. You had good flow though and decent vocab. Good drop.


Overall, Thing took this for the reasons above. Sry I can't poll, but can u drop an honest vote on my battle vs K. Much appreciated. peaceee.

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reppin strong, wurdshizle

...SMH...
Sup with that old style?
Flow was decent
Punches was weak
Personals hit softly...
Wordplay .. there wasnt much...
Overall.......10/20




...Better...
Punches were decent
Flow was good
Personals were decent
Wordplay was lacked
Structure was better...
Overall......13/20


V/Thing
Came harder
Did better

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