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Thrust 5 83.33%
CarsonJetX2 1 16.67%
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Old 02-06-04, 10:17 PM   #1
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CarsonJet -v- Thrust

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Old 02-06-04, 10:19 PM   #2
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Old 02-06-04, 10:36 PM   #3
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Thrust


What the fuck? kerrdizzy? aka an now Thrust?...
This kid holds as much value as Compton Trust
Merkins a must....
Remove the rust, an what u got?its Soft Focus...
Shit..If your a vette then Ima Lotus....
Dont get pissed if u dont come away with this,..
Its elevated....In here u can't play Gynacologist
what happened?...Man I thought u were better?
O wait....I get it..No more ghost writes from Vendetta
Fuck it....
Ima say it here,Execs an focus aint in the same hemisphere
I mean it's not geneticly possible....U can't son ur peers
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Old 02-06-04, 10:36 PM   #4
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Jet went to McDonald's..Fuck the hoe decided to come back..
Even with all the excessive fats..It's heavy weight status he lacks!
The Execs are done, Through bitch, It's been over with...
Ever since..You joined the crew...soon went out taktik!
It's obvious, We were all newbs, Well.. You still remain...
The kid we shit on..Remeber it's just the same ol' same!
Writer's block..Ah..Well you probably know the feeling right?
Cuz all ya do is fillers with occasional pre-writes!
You've been around a while...But never causing much hype..
He'd only be noticed...When he has the talent to bite lines
 
Old 02-06-04, 10:58 PM   #5
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4 posts then they think we both dropped....
I'll waste my upp....(1)
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Old 02-07-04, 05:57 PM   #6
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Lil weak battle here, .. but thrust takes this, carson in my opinon used fillers & tryed them to look personals .. both came weak no wow's here.. just a few punches, ..wich thrust takes.. here .. so V/ Thrust.
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Old 02-07-04, 09:48 PM   #7
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I think that carson jet got this one, his closer beat out everything. I didn't like the lay out too much but you won in my opinion. Not a very good, battle, you guys musta dropped off since I was last here, Thrust your closer didn't rhyme btw

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Old 02-08-04, 12:31 AM   #8
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What the fuck? kerrdizzy? aka an now Thrust?...
This kid holds as much value as Compton Trust
meh....no dice....3/10

Merkins a must....
Remove the rust, an what u got?its Soft Focus...
Shit..If your a vette then Ima Lotus....
gadzooks no....2/10

Dont get pissed if u dont come away with this,..
Its elevated....In here u can't play Gynacologist
sorry..but this is wack...1/10

what happened?...Man I thought u were better?
O wait....I get it..No more ghost writes from Vendetta
i guess..4/10

Fuck it....
Ima say it here,Execs an focus aint in the same hemisphere
I mean it's not geneticly possible....U can't son ur peers
nope...2/10

overall for carson....12/50...sorry but i dont know how ur elite....



Jet went to McDonald's..Fuck the hoe decided to come back..
Even with all the excessive fats..It's heavy weight status he lacks!
reckon....4/10

The Execs are done, Through bitch, It's been over with...
Ever since..You joined the crew...soon went out taktik!
bad wording...4/10

It's obvious, We were all newbs, Well.. You still remain...
The kid we shit on..Remeber it's just the same ol' same!
nope.....2/10

Writer's block..Ah..Well you probably know the feeling right?
Cuz all ya do is fillers with occasional pre-writes!
weak...3/10

You've been around a while...But never causing much hype..
He'd only be noticed...When he has the talent to bite lines
nope...2/10

overall for thrust..........15/50...i honestly dont see how ur in elite either...


winner-thrust....wack ass fuckin battle though...both came wack as fuck
just thrust edged it out by not being as wack....no hate..peace
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Old 02-08-04, 12:47 AM   #9
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Carson ive seen you come way harder than this. your structure threw ya flow off and ya punches didn't hit as hard as they should've. Your best verse was your closer, and there were too many metas that were wasted with poor setups. thrust your verse wasn't the best either. you had harder punches that were laced with hard personals, but your closer was horrible. i can't really tell either to elevate but i can say that they both can do way better than that so my vote goes to Thrust

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Old 02-08-04, 12:53 AM   #10
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i'm in elite cuz of my topical skill...
i'm just getting back into text right here


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Old 02-08-04, 12:56 AM   #11
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sorry for the freepost....
but...

ok Thrust....validation of elite is accepted....respect for topical heads...peace
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Old 02-08-04, 02:11 AM   #12
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Quote:
Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
Thrust
What the fuck? kerrdizzy? aka an now Thrust?...
This kid holds as much value as Compton Trust
Merkins a must....

Meh..Iffy Opener.
Quote:
Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
Remove the rust, an what u got?its Soft Focus...
Shit..If your a vette then Ima Lotus....

Good Punch. Kinda Funny.
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Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
Dont get pissed if u dont come away with this,..
Its elevated....In here u can't play Gynacologist

LOL. Good.
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Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
what happened?...Man I thought u were better?
O wait....I get it..No more ghost writes from Vendetta
Fuck it....

Decent Attempt At A Personal.
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Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
Ima say it here,Execs an focus aint in the same hemisphere
I mean it's not geneticly possible....U can't son ur peers

Nah. Wasn't Feelin This Closer.
Man this was a week verse...Punches were kinda there..but it's like your a flyweight throwin. Your Opener and Closer lacked. Need a some elevation.



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Originally Posted by Thrust
Jet went to McDonald's..Fuck the hoe decided to come back..
Even with all the excessive fats..It's heavy weight status he lacks!

Decent Opener.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Thrust
The Execs are done, Through bitch, It's been over with...
Ever since..You joined the crew...soon went out taktik!

Meh.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Thrust
It's obvious, We were all newbs, Well.. You still remain...
The kid we shit on..Remeber it's just the same ol' same!

No Punch.
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Originally Posted by Thrust
Writer's block..Ah..Well you probably know the feeling right?
Cuz all ya do is fillers with occasional pre-writes!

A Punch...decent.
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Originally Posted by Thrust
You've been around a while...But never causing much hype..
He'd only be noticed...When he has the talent to bite lines

Meh. Okay Closer. At Least You Had One.

This was a okay verse. Your punches need to be there...this was really non existant...

OVERALL:
vote: Thrust.

this was a whack battle but Thrust actually had a closer and opener.

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Old 02-08-04, 11:14 PM   #13
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(2) damn u thrust
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Old 07-16-04, 08:49 PM   #14
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Old 07-18-04, 05:19 PM   #15
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Carson... when you finally get ready to battle me... Let me know...


by the way... Thrust had the all around better verse... besides Cars ya opener... AND closer were shit.



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