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05-27-03, 10:22 PM | #1 | |||||||
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I'm Back!
IP: 8E44 BF12
yo yo i flow tha nastiness, most disasterous, its humiliating to others no matchin this/
ya'll fear my fury it's got you collapsin bitch, im rather humble than angry i'll ration-shit/ i contributed my life to tha mic no endin my futuristic cause my sadistic writtens, mystersilly mystic, full of ya self you so egotistic/ not me though im so artisitic i paint pictures wit written scriptures so blindy i see tha colors evolve change before my eyes suddenely my problems are solved/ my worrys away, i'll die but only on "burry me day" tha clouds look blurry today tha gray smog covers my eyes an blinds me/so i become blindly inadequte, writtin ina pad so sick, ya so outtaline you aint have a choice you hada quit!/ i made this before you im glad im quick, but yet ya mind aint foucused/ so you wouldnt effect my initallty direct thesis, oh Jesus they correct, im so sick i'll infect diseases no sympothy man, fuck ya "pleases"/ Ya'll could examin my rhymes close up an experience tha sight of a legend/ supremesy im pledgin, im pleasant, im tha best to grace tha essence, blessed tha best from tha past, to tha present/ though currently im stresstin to figure outta new lesson, a new plan of attack, a new vicisous plan for my raps what im guessin/ no question, i'll rip you in 80 parts in one session/ so complex and verbally flexin my vocals to their most sharp percision/ blood hungry im now ina sharks position, no room for cowards sorey but deaths my hearts decision/ i just murdered this verse yo i deserve life in prison/ uh |
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05-27-03, 11:30 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 1B41 5B79
flow was hard to follew but wordplay n elivatin wer ill tight
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05-27-03, 11:32 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 0B5C E56C
Flow was a little choppy. Multies seemed rushed, and some lines were tight while others weren't. You want consistancy. That's the best thing to have in hard shit like this. Not bad tho man. Welcome back. Peep either Reflection of Fate (a deep joint) or Key to Privacy (Comedy)
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05-28-03, 08:52 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: A604 EE64
Tight shit, dogg....ive been gone for a minute, good to see you back too...holla at ya boi...we'll start a lil' somethin....
PM ya boi.... P.e.a.c.e. |
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05-28-03, 01:58 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: F11D C4BA
I thought that was pretty tight man good drop. I thought the flow was so it was easy enough to go through in my head.
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05-28-03, 04:59 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: B618 FFDE
i liked it keep doing what you do....
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