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lilshawn 2 100.00%
The Reaper 0 0%
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Old 07-22-04, 10:35 PM   #1
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lilshawn vs. The Reaper

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15 bars (30 lines) max
no d/r
no biting
no recycling
no flipping, it's a blind spit
no crew
due 1 hour from check in.
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Old 07-22-04, 11:04 PM   #2
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lilshawn comin in here trying to start rips
it's impossible, like a paraplegic doin flips
runnin around in the forums harassin me
my punch leaves him swollen, lookin like Rosie
his vocab's wack, he need to buy a dictionary
he draw guns in pictionary, not in real life, just fictionary
this kid's sixteen, trying to act big and brave
but I'ma whip his ass just like he my slave
he tries to do pimpin, but he just gimpin'
to his flow, we say "doh!" just like Homer Simpson
you try to call me out in threads about top ten
why you even in there when you can't score a win?
you from memphis tennessee, a hick out in the bush
my words over this kid's head, it goes whooosh
what's up with [url=http://community.rapbattles.com/search.php?searchid=58223aaa in every single post?[/url]
Aimless Asshole Alliance, and you're trying to boast?
in "diss the person above you", ya talk about birds
you so lame I could beat you without using words
ya spit's like Hellen Keller deaf, dumb, blind, and lame
unlike you however, she came to great acclaim
while you the same, in ya game, with no fame to proclaim
your name's a shame, your words not hot, but yeah you a flame
in a fight, you like "Rice Krispies", ya "snap, crackle and pop"
cement's hitting your face harder with every single whop
twenty one percent happy, and it's going further down
it's sick of being the rapper to the biggest clown in town
and we all know how you got the name, "lilshawn"
you the billionth textcee tryin to be, lil Jon
like a candle that's burned out, you're smokey with no light
and like Mike Tyson when he's hungry, you're not worth the fight
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Old 07-22-04, 11:06 PM   #3
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Quote:
Originally Posted by The Reaper
lilshawn comin in here trying to start rips
it's impossible, like a paraplegic doin flips
runnin around in the forums harassin me
my punch leaves him swollen, lookin like Rosie
his vocab's wack, he need to buy a dictionary
he draw guns in pictionary, not in real life, just fictionary
this kid's sixteen, trying to act big and brave
but I'ma whip his ass just like he my slave
he tries to do pimpin, but he just gimpin'
to his flow, we say "doh!" just like Homer Simpson
you try to call me out in threads about top ten
why you even in there when you can't score a win?
you from memphis tennessee, a hick out in the bush
my words over this kid's head, it goes whooosh
what's up with aaa in every single post?
Aimless Asshole Alliance, and you're trying to boast?
in "diss the person above you", ya talk about birds
you so lame I could beat you without using words
ya spit's like Hellen Keller deaf, dumb, blind, and lame
unlike you however, she came to great acclaim
while you the same, in ya game, with no fame to proclaim
your name's a shame, your words not hot, but yeah you a flame
in a fight, you like "Rice Krispies", ya "snap, crackle and pop"
cement's hitting your face harder with every single whop
twenty one percent happy, and it's going further down
it's sick of being the rapper to the biggest clown in town
and we all know how you got the name, "lilshawn"
you the billionth textcee tryin to be, lil Jon
like a candle that's burned out, you're smokey with no light
and like Mike Tyson when he's hungry, you're not worth the fight


messed up with the url codes. judge what I just quoted, you can look back and it's still the same.
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Old 07-22-04, 11:56 PM   #4
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lilshawn, you're on-line and you wanted to battle, stop running.
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Old 07-23-04, 01:43 AM   #5
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wOW!
yo lil shawns shit was long as fuck
and you know what my vote goes to him because
his shit was hella long and still kept me interested
good flow both yall

vote:shawn

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Old 07-23-04, 02:00 AM   #6
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Aight Reaper, ya started slippin at the end, you shouldve saved all the hot shit for last.
Lilshawn was long as fuck, but it had sum good punchlines in there.

vote: Lilshawn, that gumbo line was off the chain
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Old 07-23-04, 08:33 AM   #7
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Maybe I just missed his spit.... I don't know what the hell you guys are talking about.
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Old 08-01-04, 07:09 PM   #8
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YOU DICKS LIL AINT SPIT YET YOU FUCKING JERKS THAT WAS REAPER SPIT REAPER GO REPORT THESE DICK RIDERS
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Old 08-01-04, 07:10 PM   #9
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Aight Reaper, ya started slippin at the end, you shouldve saved all the hot shit for last.
Lilshawn was long as fuck, but it had sum good punchlines in there.

vote: Lilshawn, that gumbo line was off the chain

OBVIOUSLY A DR LIL VERSE AINT UP BOTH VERSES UP IS REAPERS SPIT AND THEY SAY THE SAME THING SO OBVIOUSLY HE AINT READ IT
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Old 08-04-04, 02:46 PM   #10
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the reaper ripped this shit...lil shawn better come wit it if he wants a chance in this battle.
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Old 08-12-04, 04:36 PM   #11
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Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it
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