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Old 09-23-05, 09:29 AM   #1
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Chi-Town!!! -STAND UP!- ''Da Whole City Behind Us''

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Hook:
Stand Up Dis Is Chi-Townz Finest
Where U At Dog? Da Whole City Behind Us!
x2

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Raized in Illinois, I'm Ill~Wit~Toys..Aim Clips Too Kill~Yuh~Boys
It's Da Real~McCoy Put On Earth Too Annoy-n-Destroy
Nah Not Here Too Employ//// Juz Rhymin To Entertain
I'd Enter'Tha'Game, Then Rap Niggas Wuld Start To Campaign
Handin Out Protests, Signatures Bein Jotted./My Demise Is Plotted
So I Rub Anti-Freeze On Tha Dome Juz To ''Cool These Hot-Heads''
I Got~Threads, n Not Tha Type U Like Too Drop Posts-In...
I Only Rock The Flyest Gear....But Not That I'm Boastin
I'm Pot-Roastin, Mixin Ya Life Witta Hint Of A Knife...
U At Home Suckin Yo Teeth n Mopin' Tha Floor Like A Housewife
Now Ya Gon' Live A Mouse~Strife//Other ''Kats'' Takin Yo ''Cheese''
Chi Town Streets Call Me 'LockSmith' Cuz I'm Makin Those ''Keys''
Sellin Crack To A Girl Who Been Macked n Pleadin On Her Kneez
While She In That Position/I Nicely Suggest.. ''Suk My Cock,Please''
I Plot~Feeds, ''Air Out My'' Prey Without Singin Any Hymns
Got King Kong ''Balls''///..Knockin U Down Like Bowlin Pins
I Roll~In~Timbs, Size 11//Use More Math n Divide Dis 187
Tha Rents Say...
...''He Was Jus A Pussy''//But Its Ok, 'All Dogs Go to Heaven'
It Aint All Bad News, I Had~Tha~Flue..Now I'm HandPicked
I Wuz Blessed Wit Da Talent Of Makin The Medicin~Sick!
Da Dicks In One Hand, Mic Glued Too The Other........
I'll Take Incest In My Intrest n Even ''Fuck Over'' My Own Mother
....No Intercorse.
Jus Me Wit' ''Ice Rocks'' Heavier Than A ''Winters~Force''
I Run Circles n Laps Round Yall Like A ''Sprinters~Corse''
So Take The Fact On A Track I'ma Beast//
Cuz Its 'Ludacris' To Think I Aint ''Distrubin Tha Peace''

Hook:
Stand Up Dis Is Chi-Townz Finest
Where U At Dog? Da Whole City Behind Us!
x2
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Old 09-23-05, 04:33 PM   #2
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Old 09-23-05, 04:58 PM   #3
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was feelin this.......... sorta had a Cassidy feel to it........ if u spit like Cass it flowed well, some of the best metas i've seen in a "freestyle" *smiles* nice hook......... okay voc., but mostly cuz of the metas......... nice piece fam, overall 8.5/10.... keep em comin..........
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Old 09-23-05, 05:13 PM   #4
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Yo Thanx Hommie Link Me 2 Yo Peice n I'll Leave Feed Rite Way & Yo Check My Latest Battle Dogg!!! Vs Big O, I Merked Dat Kidd!
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Old 09-24-05, 06:04 AM   #5
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yo man this woz tight wit the multis!. you had sum real nice material in this

Handin Out Protests, Signatures Bein Jotted./My Demise Is Plotted
So I Rub Anti-Freeze On Tha Dome Juz To ''Cool These Hot-Heads''

i fuckin luv that bar! lol

I Roll~In~Timbs, Size 11//Use More Math n Divide Dis 187
Tha Rents Say...
...''He Was Jus A Pussy''//But Its Ok, 'All Dogs Go to Heaven'

that line woz dope aswell

you used some nice punchlines and kept a decent flow. im feelin this 9/10
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Old 09-24-05, 06:56 AM   #6
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Yo Thanx Hommie! I Appreciate Dat!!!
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Old 09-24-05, 12:17 PM   #7
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Feeeeeeeeeeeeeed
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Old 09-25-05, 12:45 PM   #8
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Yo C'mmon n Leave Feed & Linkz
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Old 09-26-05, 11:58 AM   #9
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Upping!!!!!!!!!
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Old 09-27-05, 06:55 PM   #10
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Plz Sumbodu Leave Feed DAM
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Old 10-12-05, 10:15 AM   #11
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Yo Gimme Sum Feedbacc
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Old 10-14-05, 07:15 AM   #12
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Upping Dis....!
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