Drop It Like It’s Hot

Like P DIDDY in New York I see city but like a committee
Beg for reports and pledge in courts for support what a pity
In a dim mood need to improve my attitude drunk a glass
Of wine, pave streets in grave heat guess I’m a brave freak
Pass the gator aid, must act bad just can’t behave weak
Got lame script on the same trip proper juice like doctor Seus
Like birds they flock together true and hot forever with spruce
Get quickly lyrical and glue your brains with sticky material no excuse
A nerd blind and I’ll use birdlime to trap you don’t rap true
Hip hop look I move some folks when I groove in quotes new
Have to do a street march sometime just to keep watch on crime
Freak in the mind every time a glock is pulled or a nine
Block is full of blind cats with designed gatts for killing
Must maintain order and stop the lame slaughter of folks chilling
Innocent as bystanders,// other problems emotions and strange force
Can arrange a divorce sleeping with another chick a brother on course
To become a trick looking for some quick pussy a one night stand
Done hyped the man, now baby mama drama takes place no plan
To raise a child but you crave wild for stray coo-chee now a low man
Got involved no stout job just finance by chance after a hard hustle //
If you sell drugs being a hell thug have to have yards of muscle
Establish the facts of the matter how crack can shatter lives
And scatter knives of destruction and serve a platter of bad vibes
Flawless and proud but ran into a lawless crowd like a mob
The type involved with crime this time wrong doorknob
Some hardcore slobs coming at a bazaar pace sent by scar face

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Homie the rhyme'n is good and all but the way you tried to make it flow
didn't quite come out good.............you basically just kept go'n where you should've
ended the line to start a new.........poor use of multies no hate thoh..........
it's still a good piece but vocab and everything was just ok


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Appear before folks with sincere quotes got speeches so lame that
Reaches the brain and teaches the games of life with flames and stats
Flow bringing crowds but like low hanging clouds my lyrics fogs
A city and can also clog a committee with facts they fear it like dogs
Now in my room the writing begin at noon try rhyme galore and hard
It’s a crime before man and god if I don’t, want to be more than a retard
In book folding pages of sore dust the golden age is before us
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Mr. Multie THANKS FOR REESPONDING FOR REAL YO

Why The Fuck My Posts Being Moved For No Reason?

its called freestyle forum..where Freestyles go.. dont re-post this topic again or i will bann you

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