NWA put gangsta rap on the map...Now they call it the ''New Crack''
Cause half these ''Niggas'' addicted to pretendin they got a strap (what?)
this aint no Bra Cup, Only C's round here is Caliber Gettin You Clipped up
You can run n be brave but ya rib cage is like broken contracts..
.................................................. .................Gettin Ripped Up
you trip n slip up on that G Shit then the fees hit your head
contracts right and center, niggas like ducks quakin for the...Bread.
&on your death bed, you claimin peace for the streets...Thats weak.
cause wasnt you the one actin like a big shot last week? (huh?)
I'm hot like heat, and your soundin like whack emcees on repeat
The emcee elite, runnin - tracks like a professional athlete...
You get out lapped...Thewn pull the mack out and gasp...
scared to pull, one's flyin at your skull and all you see is your past.
so thru thick or thin...your the pin - stripe...known as Bitch - Like.
I Hope y'all Think about ^ that the next time you jam on...This Mic.

*Hands you the mic*


Holla

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ok pretty good but a lil short, u had some multies but i think u could have put in a few more in there. and i believe u forced in one or 2 rhymes witch doesnt really help but overall ima give u a 7.8/10 cus it was pretty good. return the favor on my open mic hellsent

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.

I was just fuckin round...

that dude tony green was gettin on my nerves so I just key'd this up quick time to take my mind off things...thats why its so short

thanks for the feed tho, buuuump..

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FeeDbaCk:


Thiz was more of something that Ud Here on da Mic...i think i would have been able to feel it better...but overall. this was a DeCent PoSt..I cant critique to much, cuz im not that great my Self...

Ya Vocab kinda on da Low, Side, try going thru a thesaurs to add more weight to ur lyrics...

Otha, than that, i Think ya gonna be on da Road, u stay at it...

YUP!

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~*~ Open Micz In Need of Feed~*~
Tashay n BonaFide Collab FreeStyle..

I LaunCh RoCketz Da Size Of CoCk Pitz../LyRiCists only "Cum QuiCk" with a "DilDo" and a Sex "FliCk"..//

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

Thanks for the feed....

Sup para?

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I didn't know it was a keystyle...

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

lol...

Meanin?

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it was it3 k33p it up

This was pretty good overall. I saw a couple multies in there which was good helpin you flow and the vocab was good and everything. Nice drop wish it was a lil longer, but good job man. Please rtf on one of my freestyles. Thanks peace.

bump.....................

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