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Drop It Like It’s Hot
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Drop It Like It’s Hot
Like P DIDDY in New York I see city but like a committee Beg for reports and pledge in courts for support what a pity In a dim mood need to improve my attitude drunk a glass Of wine, pave streets in grave heat guess I’m a brave freak Pass the gator aid, must act bad just can’t behave weak Got lame script on the same trip proper juice like doctor Seus Like birds they flock together true and hot forever with spruce Get quickly lyrical and glue your brains with sticky material no excuse A nerd blind and I’ll use birdlime to trap you don’t rap true Hip hop look I move some folks when I groove in quotes new Have to do a street march sometime just to keep watch on crime Freak in the mind every time a glock is pulled or a nine Block is full of blind cats with designed gatts for killing Must maintain order and stop the lame slaughter of folks chilling Innocent as bystanders,// other problems emotions and strange force Can arrange a divorce sleeping with another chick a brother on course To become a trick looking for some quick pussy a one night stand Done hyped the man, now baby mama drama takes place no plan To raise a child but you crave wild for stray coo-chee now a low man Got involved no stout job just finance by chance after a hard hustle // If you sell drugs being a hell thug have to have yards of muscle Establish the facts of the matter how crack can shatter lives And scatter knives of destruction and serve a platter of bad vibes Flawless and proud but ran into a lawless crowd like a mob The type involved with crime this time wrong doorknob Some hardcore slobs coming at a bazaar pace sent by scar face Last edited by gladbag : 10-17-05 at 11:06 AM. |
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10-17-05, 08:33 AM | #2 | ||||||
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10-17-05, 08:43 AM | #3 | ||||||
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Homie the rhyme'n is good and all but the way you tried to make it flow
didn't quite come out good.............you basically just kept go'n where you should've ended the line to start a new.........poor use of multies no hate thoh.......... it's still a good piece but vocab and everything was just ok Check links in sig for my Open Mics
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10-17-05, 08:54 PM | #5 | ||||||
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Appear before folks with sincere quotes got speeches so lame that
Reaches the brain and teaches the games of life with flames and stats Flow bringing crowds but like low hanging clouds my lyrics fogs A city and can also clog a committee with facts they fear it like dogs Now in my room the writing begin at noon try rhyme galore and hard It’s a crime before man and god if I don’t, want to be more than a retard In book folding pages of sore dust the golden age is before us + |
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10-17-05, 08:55 PM | #6 | ||||||
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Mr. Multie THANKS FOR REESPONDING FOR REAL YO
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10-17-05, 09:44 PM | #7 | ||||||
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Why The Fuck My Posts Being Moved For No Reason?
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its called freestyle forum..where Freestyles go.. dont re-post this topic again or i will bann you
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10-17-05, 10:33 PM | #9 | ||||||
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Authorities Think We Shoulld Battle For The Moderater's Position
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