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08-28-05, 05:18 PM | #1 | ||
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Mad Knight & Tony Green - Hidden Love
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[Verse3:Mad Knight] Feelings taking over the movement of the mouth to say u love her You realise just how powerful love is when you just sit and stare Because at this moment in time God is showing u what love is about But the feelings you have are seeming to deep inside to be pulled out To the minute and the hour love is working and is set in the brain and heart Even when she glances at other men, you can feel your heart tear apart Your still thinking it’s a child hood crush, that’s all it ever is In the back of your mind your hand holding hers but these are fake images Mind is working,think of what to say, so it doesn’t end in tears Anything to say that you love her, adore her and want to hold her near This girl taking over your mind, while u sit and talk, its all just love fusion Still your mind is playing tricks,you and her kissing is just an innocent illusion Time ticking away, your still unknown of what to say,hoping time will just freeze While she was just another tease,heart torn apart but your love is still begging please [Hook:Tony Green] I like they way you switch when you walk,lick your lips when you talk. Candle light dinners...........I can see the fire sparks. Roll play, now play now play your part. This is true love I can see it from the start. [Verse2:Tony Green] This situation got me stressin I'm mentally in depression. Seein your thick thighs got a physical obessesion. Me and you was coo... I would talk you listen. Now this collison with the cops got me locked in a prison. 3 months I was locked up and I thought about you. I was Usher you Alicia you forever my boo. How cute I would do anything to make amends. Straight with you...but you say that you just a friend. I see you walkin thru the mall with you friends and all. Given other niggaz the eye straight pissin me off. And when beef came you told me make peace like Ghandi. Wasn't thier when I called but was on time like Ashanti. You got me, you represent love and respect. Cause you got a nigga twisted and I aint Keith Sweat. So drop some feed it will be returned!! http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204431 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204126 |
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08-28-05, 05:18 PM | #2 | ||
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hahaha this is my second OM of today and im droppin one tomorrow
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08-28-05, 05:24 PM | #3 | ||
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Damn this is hot uppin!
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08-28-05, 06:27 PM | #4 | |
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Mad Knight - your verse was good. good vocab and words that really got us to realize the whole concept of what you were tryna say. good flow
Tony Green - vocab not so good. you had more multis than Mad Knight so youre flow was slightly better overall i would give it a 7 |
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08-28-05, 06:28 PM | #5 | ||
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Thanxx uppin......
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08-28-05, 07:31 PM | #6 | ||
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im feelin mad knights verse more than tony's mad knight had good flow...nice emotion good imagery....iight vocab......
tony had iight everything.....but lacked in ya vocab.....overall id give it 7.5/10 really good piece im feelin it.....RTF ya'lll!!
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08-28-05, 08:17 PM | #7 | ||
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This was a preety good piece,i wasfeeling both verses and the hook was sick,ya should collab more often
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08-28-05, 08:47 PM | #8 | ||
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i know we just blend together lol
i could do a good collab with ANYone lol!!!!! |
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08-28-05, 08:50 PM | #9 | ||
GeNeRaL
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Me and you collabo when ever you want cause every time i see your shit im impressed
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08-28-05, 08:51 PM | #10 | ||
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Well ya i am pure dizzydope lol
you got aim or msn???? |
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08-28-05, 08:54 PM | #11 | |||
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Yeah NaRc3589 |
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08-28-05, 09:18 PM | #12 | ||
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ok added
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08-29-05, 12:20 AM | #13 | ||
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uppin to the top
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08-29-05, 10:17 AM | #14 | ||
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erm...........mad knight-your verse had more imagery and emotion nicer vocab liked it flow wasnt so good but still nice
tony-ya vcab woznt that good and use more emotion but the flow was nice work well together One.
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08-29-05, 04:24 PM | #15 | ||
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uppin to the top
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