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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Nostradamus 5 71.43%
Drakel 2 28.57%
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 01-08-06, 12:54 AM   #1
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Voted For: Nostradamus

I have to give this battle to Nos...

To win a battle in my oppinion you have to grab the attention of the reader and pull him into your words...

"but he doesn't want control, just to know his presence's felt
he's not judging every motion, but his arms are open for some help"
I liked that closing... pretty meaningfull...

Drakel: I feel that you didnt really have a strong opening... your verse was pretty good...
It had great vocab... and pretty touching...

Nostradamus: I felt your intro stole this battle for you...

"Yo
If they ask me who the fuck I am?
....Bro I spend no less than a second to tell em 'N O S'"
Great intro... really to the point..
I liked your multi's... especially these lines...

"like nitro bro this shit might blow!
...............My flow's electric in retrospective, I go
Above & beyond white snow & hydro combined yo"
It would be a good audio verse aswell...

Close battle... but final vote goes to Nos...
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