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Old 01-25-04, 09:57 PM   #1
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B.I.Detained Vs Young P

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10 lines
no polls
no feedin
no hate etc
30 mins to spit
check in b4

G'luck hoe
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Old 01-25-04, 09:58 PM   #2
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Old 01-25-04, 10:10 PM   #3
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Ok. Check. 30 Mins from now and I should have a product.

Bye.

.........................................Ps.

May be a lil rusty.
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Old 01-25-04, 10:42 PM   #4
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this Young Hopes lie in this Stiff Test, A Dyslexic Tryin to Pass
chum-P has a Slimmer Chance..than a Turd thru that Rhino's Ass^^ava
he came Last..in a 2 man-2 Metre Dash..n the winner was Fast?
thats a Laff, tried Addin it up at the End n cunt face the After-Math
only a Flat chance..of Beating Me..it'll be Armageddon b4 its Inflated
see Young cud PM every1 Nice Thoughts N still wind up being Hated
star in RB's The Castrated..even F.Lines Threatens him w/ the Chop
he Broke his Waist N Feet..jus so he can Brag about Reppin "Hip Hop"
this is the Final Stop!!!..all Wack asses plz make their way of the Bus
that means you too Young..i cant be Keepin NoMore Wak Vehicle Dust
*So B.I. wipes away Young*

Nice try..better luck next Time??
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Old 01-25-04, 10:56 PM   #5
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Ok...well I finally get revenge. And it won't even count. Nevertheless. B. I...

Beat me in our last showdown, but circumstances have changed... you lost wit.
B I is a vet? Come on... the most popular thread you ever made was called Talk Shit.
Call yourself straight, that's questionable... like what the fuck is a B I?
I said Bitches Come Out and wasn't suprised you were the first to reply.
Getting cock is a dirty habit... quit now is the choice that I advise you toward.
Cause if the dick is a new piece... I'm pretty sure you've monopolized the board.
You've been whored... but if riding is a sure win, your gonna need it present.
Cause like your crew... when it comes to skill, you've been known as a peasant.
Do you get the message... I had minutes to spend, till you managed to waste mine.
And I knew you'd hop off eventually...
.......................................I just pushed you off to save time!

Bye
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Old 01-25-04, 11:10 PM   #6
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nice battle gentlemen i feel that B.I. took this one with personals that never stopped very good play off the avy the circumstances and what not...The punches landed well and were memorable very witty nice shit good drop i liked he better luck next time at the end ahah.......Young P nothing wrong with your verse son...had a couple good personals the play off the crew was there and was decent just didn't come as hard to this one as i expected you would for a rematch.....my vote B.I. both y'all hit this up..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109696
 
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and you don't have a poll ..........so...........ok ........
 
Old 01-25-04, 11:17 PM   #8
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hmm...close battle right chea...


wasnt really feelin either verse....but here goes...

BI- hmm...punches were kinda blah...i didnt like the opener..and its like u tried to
get too creative and ended up fuckin up...but the effort counts....

Young-weak verse as well...u had no effort in creativeness...punches coulda been
re-worded much better....also a little sloppy wit the structure on the new
format..

winner-BI...yup...better verse..peace
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Old 01-25-04, 11:19 PM   #9
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2-0 me uppin
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Old 01-26-04, 11:37 AM   #10
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More personals then me?

I wasnt quite thinking the same thing but I guess you guys arent reading it right.

W/e.

Uppin.
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Old 01-26-04, 11:45 AM   #11
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actually... Young had a pretty good verse... BI was ok...


except for flow P had this pretty much locked I must admit...

Game time pretty much broke it down... but I think P should win...
 
Old 01-26-04, 01:59 PM   #12
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^i agree... bi came decent but ma man Young P dropped a better verse, his flow was off with a couple of stretched lines but apart from that, he had better vocab, cleverer harder hitting punches and more personals,... i liked the 'bitches come out' line the most

so vote young p

<b>edit: hit up the battle in my sig in return....</b>
 
Old 01-26-04, 02:58 PM   #13
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^^^^^3 votes against me in 3 battles nice
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Old 01-26-04, 03:02 PM   #14
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ok i give this to b.i,

i just preferd his verse it was close rite but,
he had a nicer structure(both bit streched),
harder punches with consistency,
personals was i tie but b.i wins with harder shit,
nice close shit,

plz hit this na http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109583 make sure you do..................thx............pz
 
Old 01-26-04, 04:00 PM   #15
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yo I think P took this (not a hate vote BI you know I ain't like that) only because BI's wordplay was too complicated for the simple statements he was trying to make. Not that it was bad but not good enough, P's personals were better and to the point. Both dropped like the vets they are, but both could have done better. Young P took this though, vote = P

"Beat me in our last showdown, but circumstances have changed... you lost wit.
B I is a vet? Come on... the most popular thread you ever made was called Talk Shit."

nice opener.

pz yall
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