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Old 09-16-05, 12:39 AM   #1
2Fast2Furious
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Wanna have the nice whips ?
the nice homes?
yachts n ships?
placing ya chips
got ya dice to roll
ready or not here ya go.

Blood sweat n tears
mixed with experience n years
all gather up to follow ya dreams
so what ya poor?
you gotta score to be seen
not remembering where you came from
not gonna back down on those who
gave you the time of day
but you run when u see em passin the other way.
Nervous and impervious to the impending danger
could fall flat on ya face and lose to a stranger.
No matta ya game, its always the same,
loser takes all the shame
but the winner gets all the glory and fame..
Man I wanna be...I gotta be a.....

Wanna have the nice whips ?
the nice homes?
yachts n ships?
placing ya chips
got ya dice to roll
ready or not here ya go.

Finally,
Fall back on what ya know,
show em you got the balls to flow.
No matta ya vice, go through with it nice
so you can rise to the top with faces and flaunt.
Just remember ya name and remember ya game
that always somewhere someone bigga than you
is aflame.
Just pray to God you’ll make em go insane
and don’t forget lest ye fall
that you of all others have made it most of all.
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Old 09-17-05, 12:54 AM   #2
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this was pretty good, flow was good, emotion was good also, nice topic, keep it up
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Old 09-17-05, 01:23 AM   #3
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Drop 2 links or this will be closed
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Old 09-17-05, 01:50 AM   #4
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Hmm. The problem here is, this piece is too.. too vague. I think you gotta get more in-depth with your drops. I can see the whole story behind it and ish, but still. Gotta go into depth.

Keep doing what you're doing.
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Old 09-18-05, 07:50 PM   #5
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nice flow good topic it was good
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