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Old 08-06-05, 03:19 PM   #1
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The Essence.
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oblivious, society's views are powerfully corruptive, and wickedly captivating...

but it's the one's who rise above, that are the truly gifted...

...The Essence...

this session leads, leaving trails to my expressions
exceeding the norm, with speed, i have fate in my possession
the questions of life, dont answer on their own
obsession and greed, lessons to weave so seeds of your soul
will grow to full potential, expanding strong with the network
but standing beyond those who have to suck dick to get work
and to those who are demanding my dream ship cannot be landing free
im more creative with this hiatus since you're all about profanity
see, i bring the music with me, believing in ingenuity
leaving rebels feeling distant for decieving continuity
heaving grievances, perceiving naives, retrieving thieved truths
seeing conceited youths, acheiving lute from pre-conceived routes
to receive repute? i'll explain, settling for fake fame does not create you
remaining true moves you closer than embezzling ever takes you
im not meddling with the message, listen to whispers instead of shouts
dont be selling yourself short, before you've begun to sprout
but if you're one to doubt, clear it out from intuition
let your mouth spout words used as lyrical ammunition
you'll hear it from this magician, my vision changes wishes
you'll be asking for the music, instead of booze or stage bitches
and ditch the digits, put on my tunes and expand your mind
unravel from views of time and travel to my land of rhymes
where i mesmerize mankind, turning a blind eye to lies with my pride refined
i dont look around for motivation..........i glance behind
and i look around at these crooks of the game, i see them stressing
while they come out with their same shit, i aim to leave you guessing
but im only a small venue of blessing, so savor my presence
because on my menu of music.....the flavour is essence
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feed.
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Old 08-06-05, 03:22 PM   #2
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Fuckin' sick OM..

I'll leave better feed later, I'm gong mini golfing..
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Old 08-06-05, 04:37 PM   #3
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Dope...the flow was there without a doubt, and this is really a masterpiece. Maddrapper might even call this rap, but more likely he'll post one of his own verses in here. The multis were well thought out, as well as the content and everything else. One of those pieces that I read a few times. Good job on this...
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Old 08-06-05, 07:13 PM   #4
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thank you.

upping.
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Old 08-06-05, 07:30 PM   #5
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This was some dope stuff right here.And....is that some multis I see?LOL...dope.
wording stayed on point throughout the whole verse.Vocabulary was extrodianary.Flow was smooth as ice.Nothing bad to say.10/10.
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Old 08-07-05, 12:44 PM   #6
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bump............
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Old 08-07-05, 12:52 PM   #7
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Nice Ill Drop Feed Later
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Old 08-07-05, 12:59 PM   #8
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dope flow was sick good multis an aight vocab
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Old 08-08-05, 11:09 AM   #9
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good shit right here.
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Old 08-09-05, 12:35 AM   #10
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dope piece man....really liked it good emotion nicely flowed......excellent structure right here.....good multies man iight vocab.........8/10

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Old 08-09-05, 12:28 PM   #11
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i'll see what i can do.
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Old 08-09-05, 01:46 PM   #12
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Fuckin Dope, Good job.. Your point really got thru in this piece, great flow.. multis were nyce.. Keep droppin' pieces like this, its enjoyable to read..


RTF, if you can- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203343
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Old 08-12-05, 02:53 AM   #13
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word...........
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Old 08-13-05, 12:13 AM   #14
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lets get some feeeeeeeeeeeed
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Old 08-13-05, 01:43 PM   #15
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Nice flow, i was feelin this good topic.....nice vocab...everything was on point 8/10...kepp it up
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