I fuckin hate the intro... I heard the original of that Close my eyes thang.. the beat itself is pretty good.

Verse 1
I like the tone in your voice, it wasn't harsh on this beat. lyrics are pretty good. Y'all on some deep stuff...

Verse 2
I feel like you can tone down your tone a bit, your voice so damn strong, Ike... but it don't sound real bad or nothin, it's just the mood of the song you gotta tone it down for. Ya flow was pretty good, lyrics pretty straight y'all two on a track sound pretty good actually.

Verse 3
Okay I like how it starts, switchin up yo flow... not bad, lyrics pretty straight. You ridin' that beat, boy...

Overall - Y'all presence is good hence I didn't comment on it. Delivery is pretty good as a whole, but Ike your voice so strong, you gotta tone it done a bit, but it wasn't bad as far as that goes. Uhm the lyrics were good amongst the both of you. I like the flow switch up in the third verse. Quality and Production was really good.. Nice collab, fellas.

Stay up,
1

*I wrote this out days ago. Finally, postin it.* lol.

__________________

not really feelin the singin

1st verse
i dont like the..whisperin..
not feelin the 1st verse

2nd verse
better
ugh, I hate to say it, but I think Im becomin an Ike fan :-(
likin the 2nd verse ALOT better than the 1st
delivery was on point

3rd verse
hmm, ok, this made me wonder, you WASNT whisperin in the 1st verse, thats just how you rap, I assume.
not really feelin your voice. but your lyrics is cool.
but its like, even if you had the best lyrics in the world, if someone dont like your voice then its goin bring down their response

overall, it was an ok track. didnt like it too much, except for Ike's verse.
this feedback is for the RG.
Leave feedback on my track
diamond in the rough

__________________

__________________

yo trip

good shit man

ur pretty versitile on the mic man. u can hit with tthe heavy hood shit, theen tear up the club with a banger and also do some deep lyrical shit.

as for this track the mixing was very tight but it seem there was a lil too much treble which made the verses seem quite load on the beat but apart from that the quality was almost perfect

wasent rele feelin the singin on the hook bout verse were str8

i have never heard IKE b4 much he seem pretty tight, u got a pretty commerical type flow but its all good, u need to keep practising to find a flow thats original and suits u

Triple is basically there in my opinion. He has jus gotta keep bangin out the tracks untill he is noticed

keep it up man

__________________

lmao intro is madd funny..

1st verse-
pretty nice trip
flow is coo, your emotion and delivery is right on point
im liking the lyrics, pretty deep shit
something about this verse that sounds to "whisper-ish" to me though
maybe its the way you mixed it? or the effects added to your voice
i dont think it suit the track really, you fixed it in the 3rd verse

2nd-
ike good stuff
im def liking your flow, prolly my favorite part of the track
delivery is right there, you always kill the real deep emotional type tracks, they definetly fit your style
lyrics accompany the delivery shits deep, i liked it

3rd verse-
trip much better with the emotion/delivery here
as i said earlier i thought the 1st verse was a lil too whisper ish
i liked how this verse seem to be a lil more intense, a lil more emotion in there
your flow fell off a tad with some of your lyrics
it seemed like you tried to pack a few too many words into some lines
but other than that it was fine
lyrics was nice throughout the track

overall some solid stuff
i wasnt a fan of the beat really, but thats just me
you two work well together, good shit.

__________________

i heard this beat about a month back while searching on SC... thought about using it but i see y'all beat me to it... trip.... liking the effects ya put on ya verse... lyrics were cool but coulda went a lil deeper i think...

second verse... that's it!!! i gotta collab with this dude right here... ike been impressing me with his flow and delivery... his lyrical content is also a step above most kats on this site... i know omma get some flack cuz kats hate when you like somebody shyt*like it's a crime or sumn*...but hey... it is what it is.... shyt's dope... third verse.... honestly... i stopped after the second.... shyt was good enough for me to critique with just tose 2 verses... good 1-2 punch from these dudes... and yo trip... thanks for da tips...it's gettin' better... werdage

and oh yeah... this is for da rap game before i forget

__________________

CLICK DA SIGGY

i'm feelin this mad...man this is problay the dopest collab i heard on this site for real...man i'm really diggin this...TRIP and IKE KILLED IT by far the best Audio heads on this site that are actually posting

alright trip i'm feelin ya first verse i'm really diggin those lyrics...they are real deep and i'm feelin the way you deliverd it and the adlibs u had on some of ya end lines i'm really likin this first first........

Ike....i like ur voice lol i dont know why but u just have a dope voice i love it...ur flow killed it and the lyrics are real deep.....i felt that mad....i'm really feelin ya presense and ya delivery wow man this is real dope

Trip....the third verse most rappers cant hold it twice on a song really hot but man u really killed it...again...ur flow is legendary on this site...man "basketball star too latest drop-out" i'm feelin taht.....thats really tight...man....i dont know how it can get tighter..anyways...this was a real dope piece


Overall thsi is problay a real song i'd put on a cd and listen too it..i'm really feelin this man...wow...this is nice.....this hsould get collab of the year for real...

overall-9.5/10

__________________

ADD ME LETS MAKE SOMETHING

TheMyspace

lmao maaaaan...this got put in the hall of fame...so im like..uppin this..hahahahaha

__________________