10 lines
15 mins
no dr c h votes
no feeding/biting

pCe

ight checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........................

call me frenchs cept no one cuts the "wannabes" like "grim"/
wat man you on narcodics?facin me ya brain must be dim/
i lyrically rip out ya eyes and put 'em on ya ass so you can see whack shit/
or i might as well show you your whck ass rhymes and that'd kill you in one hit/
i dissolve this kid like drano cept he aint worth the money/
man ive seen better flow from an boiled egg not runny/
this kids so fat only thing he can run is his mouth and lips/
ima finish your carreer as if this was a battle of pink-slips/
gotta lube up your screen cause these bars are gonna fuck ya/
your own spit freeze you so bad you turned into a sculpta/

pCe

ight this is how it goes down

ayo im a murder this man right before his grim evil eyes//
7-8-0 has turned into a local homicide//
you couldnt beat me if i was a midget with no legs//
hoppin around on a scooter on my hands with pro keds//
this little faggot is tryin to bring personification to this occasion//
the reapers been in more disney movies then caucasions//
so let me see whats he gonna say im named after drugs//
my record is 0 and 2 and hes the supreme mighty thug//
i kill thugs im like drugs and i bring the reaper to your door//
show you your mom and how a life with narcotics turned the bitch to a whore

^^^^^fuckin quick shit im tired fuck the battle i dun care

aight its all koo..uppin_1_





pCe

Flow:grim
Wordplay:grim
Punches:grim
Structure:grim

aiiight battle but grim wins cos of his supreme flow and punches


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^^^^^^Dick ryder......yous a pussy vote should not count.......uppin................................. .................................................. .................

Proficient Stles: "aiiight battle but grim wins cos of his supreme flow and punches" str8 dick rydin

alriht battle...grim definitly took this...no hate but his flow was better, punches were harder and structure was bout the same but over all grim went good on this...vote...grim...peace

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uppin_2_



pCe

uppin_3_





pCe

was not***** dr

Vote Grim no doubt Narcotic gots no vocabulary or metas his whole verse was wack Mother Goose can go platinum before him

pretty good battle i guess.....Narcotics had personals....but Grim had better wordplay and punches.....u both had equal vocabulary....don't know where the guy above got the idea that Grim had better vocabulary......u both also had equal flow....so here's a breakdown for u two....

Multis - Tie
Metas - Grim
Wordplay - Grim
Punches - Grim
Vocab - Tie
Flow - Tie
Personals - Narcotics
Creativity - Narcotics
Complexity - Grim
Violence - Narcotics
RhymeScheme - Grim
Overall - Grim

it was actually a pretty close battle between u two....but i gotta say Grim got this due to a majority in the breakdown....

peace
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