aight lets get this over with,

10-15 lines
no dick ride
no crew votes
no hate votes
remember to check in

good luck

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I'm checkin in, so lets begin//
battlin me is bad karma like the seven deadly sins//
reach within, and give it ya heart and soul//
worthless tries, ya bars are dry, I'll monopolize the polls//
stomp the moles, reverse the role, plant my own bugs//
ya bars are weak, u hold no heat like broken coffee mugs//
u still struggle, gainin stress, you describe garbage like adjectives//
I make money, and lose this weight like women with miscarraiges//
its embarrasin,send u travelin, save ya self the trouble//
predict the future like an oracle, u come wit weak rebuttals//
with bloody knuckles, u in a corner cuddled//
knock u out like alcohol, u swear u seeing double//

....aight , do ya thing and spit ya verses

aight, here's my shit to match yours

Yo, check it.......

Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins//
Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin//
It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband//
And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands//
Trying to lose my weight? I’ll leave you meditating on a baby carriage//
Break this bitch’s neck, and have his so called “money making scheme” fucked up like Britney Spears marriage//
Weak rebuttals? This isn’t debating this is a rap battle//
Your humble lyrics don’t bruise me but it has most ill rappers baffled//
Predicting the future? Then you’ll probably know the results already//
You rap like a malfunctioning robot, like is doing R&B with Beethoven’s 8th Symphony//
Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave//
And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave//

that'll teach you..................i think.

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Damn!!!! now thats one of tha best battles i've seen so far this one was very very close but imma give it 2 Tha 8th wonder because his punches hit tha hardest.... big up to both emcees doe

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Say Hello To My Little Friend

damn, ya done forgot about us, uppin for votes.... up. up, uppin

come on man, lets get some votes on this battle, it's been over a day and theres only one vote been done, we need more, WE NEED MORE!!!

anyways, good battle WillNova.

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Yo if i choud Vote i Whould Vote For the 8th wonder

Reality more Skillz

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Free Agent

uppin for votes, damn! nobodys voting in this man! someone vote

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yoyoyo, we still need sum votes up here, still uppin... Yeah them were sum tight bars 8th wonder, u were a worthy opponent.... now lets get sum votes

pretty good match


8-th came with some decent few hard punches
structure was aight ...juss work on some things

will-Came close but good try..Punches need
more work an dats what wins battles....so does
similies and metaphores..Work on Them things
elevate

v/8th wonder return the favor for me doing yours http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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willnova better flowing verse. better punches and personals. 8th you was aight but nothing to good. you wrote alpt of bullshit. get st8 to the point next time, don't beat rounf the bush. you need beteer pucnhes and lyrics. oh yeah your structure was fucked too, try not to stretch you lines, if you have good punches it will shoe in you verse, keep writtin. willniva u need to elevate 2, step up you multi's and punches too, cuz you thinkin u the shit.

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

aight, gonna need more votes on this shit, i've upped this quite a few times already, and i've gave some threads to other battle threads, but aint no people voting

it's 1-1 and this gotta keep going!

uppin for votes........

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will had better punches and flow/structure. 8ths verse was aite, but sometimes didnt flow well at all. both dope verses tho, a lot of potential.

ps. can u guys return the favour and vote in my battles:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128631

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128605

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Please Check My Rhymes:

Sum Shit I Wrote

still uppin for votes, com' on people this has been delayed for too long lets get sum votes in... thanx