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1st verse Haze
2nd verse Southern Soulja
3rd verse Kaleal Crooks
hooks.......crooks

crooks on the beat

just lookin for some feed cuz southern soulja is a local and he tryna see what other folks thinkin outside of columbus...... but yea critique the track as a whole if u want, Haze from miami so i had to try to mix our qualities to match, got a lil dumbed down in the process, but yuh lemme know

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i liked it nice quality....flow is on for everyone delivery is gud 2 nice track stay up

the beat is cool,i dont like these kinda "symphony thing"
First Verseretty cool,put more intonation in your voice
Chorus: i didnt really like the chorus,lol but anyway
2nd verse: good verse yah,i like your voice
3rd verseretty good,my favorite verse..
good flow for everyone...overall good drop

sorry for the :d lol

preciate the feedback, it may be used on one of the next albums we're doing but i'm not sure yet

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