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05-10-03, 03:07 PM | #1 | ||
Tampons are expensive
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-==WhO aM I?==-
IP:
I am the one who gets in trouble
I am the one you hear running up and down the halls I am the one who cleans myself more than once I am the hunter of birds and bugs I am the one who sleep during the days and plays at night I am the one who is friendly to all feeds me I am the one who's eyes glow in the dark I am the one who sits on the table I am the one whose ears twitch when I hear a noise I am the one who is waiting for you to come home everday from school I am the one whose coat is black I am your cat -====kinda off but thats my piece...LOL====-
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05-11-03, 09:08 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
Heh. It was qaint, and true to what it was. I got no critique for this, i couldn't, plain and simple..
..it was just so qaint (am i spelling that right?..quaint, qaint..pah!)...and in a sense, amusing in a cute way..."I am the one who's coat is black, I am your cat"... ...liked.. ...resp... |
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05-11-03, 10:13 PM | #3 | |
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IP:
I thought it was pretty fun when I read the last line. I was trying to guess what it was. I didn't guess cat though.
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05-11-03, 10:20 PM | #4 | ||
Tampons are expensive
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IP:
hehehe.....thanks v for ur point of view and yeah Legendary...im glad u think it was a funny poem...LOL
thanks guys..uppiN!
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05-13-03, 06:14 AM | #5 | |
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IP:
its kinda iight...
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