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10-17-03, 07:07 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Jus Flowin
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This outkast shit has influenced-me-now
everyone crowd-around when i be layin-it-down after my shows ya'll be hopin i'm stayin-in-town with nothin but up-side-down-frowns when i turn-around i see me starin back at me my reflection is eternal verbal 'hi-tek' 'kweli talib' i'm jumpin every hurdle i'm the freshest when i add-lib around joints i'm tight lipped right from the muthafuckin womb i was blessed to back flip your back i'll crack it in two pieces i smashed it leave you more uncomfortable then summer parka jackets my best race i may have already ran it but i keep running face off with me for you very tragic i'm so fuckin stunning i'm like that expensive diamond-cut oh-don't-touch you'll get cut not just from the tip and i-won't-smudge i leave fools debatin whether they need two or one crutch or be leavin in a stretcher like limbaugh they'll be-in-a-rush like your room mate smoked up all ya dope you're-in-a-fuss who-can-ya-trust i'll leave ya more fucked up then the right white dust// jus a keystyle, feedback welcome. |
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10-17-03, 07:28 PM | #2 | ||||||
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not bad...looks to me like just practice flowing, which is fine...some of ur rhymes don't really connect very well, but that will come with more practice...its good that u could stick to a topic, while u did this, for the most part...
keep truckin' cheers |
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10-17-03, 07:38 PM | #3 | |||||||
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yeup just practice, i appreciate your reply.
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10-17-03, 07:45 PM | #4 | |||||||
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yeah just practice and good luck in ya futue battles and keep droppin in here to get btter aight............ some of the lines didnt rhyme but its fine cuz next time ya drop will be a dime see this rhymed and i was just talkin bout ya piece ya dropped....well keep a head up and keep droppin aight.... |
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10-18-03, 07:51 PM | #5 | |||||||
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yea, thanx, uppin.
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