Darn Brandon
Said We Couldn't Do
Pink Slips.
but it's all coo...
here's the battle...


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Wreckle$$...

iight man...lemme free this real quick...get ya verse in by tonite...

im the "king" so i build a "castle"-with-this-"sand"
listen son, u aint on my level, so i wont even hastle-with-this-man
hit ya with "crayons" to add a lil "color"-to-your-game
run up wit a towel soaked in "ether" then "smother"-your-fame
put another-to-the-flame, my ryhmes aint clean or "staralyzed"
hit ya between the eyes, brake ya thighs, got you WISHIN you were paralyzed
u a bitch-without-the-clit, ya think-kid, that you can take my "pink-slip"
but u aint got my skillz, ya ryhmes are "short" and "soft" like ya "limp-dick"! (OUCH!)
my pimp-shit, my cars, my ice, got me "king-of-rocks-ho's-and-roads"
you beatin me?? thats impossible, like "yao ming"-blocked-by-"bogues"
ull "croak"-like-toads, while im the fuckin "lion"-of-this-bunch
let me put it this way...ill take you AND that "whitenigga" "dinin-out-to-lunch" (lion=carnevour)
im "linin-you-with-punches", then make you "toke"and "choke" on my gun "smoke"
i dont get it kid, how the fuck u gunna spit, with "whiteniggas" dick down ya throat??
make this note, next time u wanna battle "pink slips" dont challenge-the-"wreck"
ill make this clean as possible, ill get u screamin "bloody HECK" with a "tallon"-in-ya-neck (heck=hell clean version)

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lets begin...

yes the Christians are wondering today, this battles a lost hope...
i thought you wouldn't bite so gay but ya punches still in quotes...
kill it hoe, any thoughts of standin' over me learn to shrink quick..
if you put my hand in your privates, only way i'd get a pink slip...
think kid, give birth to a seal, but the roof aint gettin raised...
fuck battling, i'm playin' x box, an Wreckless Still Gettin Played!...
Hoe enough being gay, lets settle this, be serious for a minute...
when you said you 'dug my style' did you expect to fall in it? ...
a small victim, hoe's for paper, watch me straight up rip this whore
you ain't shatterin' glass, why the fuck you stay switchin boards?
kiddie's more? RB ain't even your home, here's an eviction notice
and i know i handed you a loss, but why are you so happy to hold it?
are you slow bitch, sit back, learn your fucking really dumb...
when heads start to elevate you get left behind like cookie crumbs
and i admit you shook me son, and in real it was goodly done...
but you got hurt quick, so now the rookies done...

LMFAO...Edited Cuz' Of INSIDE JOKE...


should be coo...pz

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iight lets up on this battle!!!!

how come it aint for pink slips no more???????

thats a lil strange......hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

uppin for votes!!!

be-eazy

wreckless your quoting to many things man dont do that it messed up your structure, iight this is how im voting

punches-wreckless

structure-sand

flo-tie

wordplay-sand

my vote=sand


hit back the favor with a FAIR vote at

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9794#post569794

i killed this kat but i still need more votes

an admin said you cant do pink slips with your amount of post.

anyways im going to vote on this battle and break both verses down so no bitches can complain about me voting.

wreckless, ya wouldve had my vote if you didnt quote so many things and if ya had more personals..................................

Wreckless

iight man...lemme free this real quick...get ya verse in by tonite...

im the "king" so i build a "castle"-with-this-"sand"
listen son, u aint on my level, so i wont even hastle-with-this-man
meh...filler...

hit ya with "crayons" to add a lil "color"-to-your-game
run up wit a towel soaked in "ether" then "smother"-your-fame
nice flow.. poor punch

put another-to-the-flame, my ryhmes aint clean or "staralyzed"
hit ya between the eyes, brake ya thighs, got you WISHIN you were paralyzed
your getting there...

u a bitch-without-the-clit, ya think-kid, that you can take my "pink-slip"
dissing yourself isnt good in battles... lol

but u aint got my skillz, ya ryhmes are "short" and "soft" like ya "limp-dick"! (OUCH!)
shoulda kept up with this heat

my pimp-shit, my cars, my ice, got me "king-of-rocks-ho's-and-roads"
FILLER FILLER FILLER*chants*

you beatin me?? thats impossible, like "yao ming"-blocked-by-"bogues"
ull "croak"-like-toads, while im the fuckin "lion"-of-this-bunch
nah...

let me put it this way...ill take you AND that "whitenigga" "dinin-out-to-lunch" (lion=carnevour)
pethetic personal

im "linin-you-with-punches", then make you "toke"and "choke" on my gun "smoke"
i dont get it kid, how the fuck u gunna spit, with "whiteniggas" dick down ya throat??
nice punch

make this note, next time u wanna battle "pink slips" dont challenge-the-"wreck"
ill make this clean as possible, ill get u screamin "bloody HECK" with a "tallon"-in-ya-neck (heck=hell clean version)
shit closer

Score: 2.5 out of 5


Sand


lets begin...

yes the Christians are wondering today, this battles a lost hope...
i thought you wouldn't bite so gay but ya punches still in quotes...
good opener

kill it hoe, any thoughts of standin' over me learn to shrink quick..
if you put my hand in your privates, only way i'd get a pink slip...
meh good punch

think kid, give birth to a seal, but the roof aint gettin raised...
fuck battling, i'm playin' x box, an Wreckless Still Gettin Played!...
heh xbox lol

Hoe enough being gay, lets settle this, be serious for a minute...
when you said you 'dug my style' did you expect to fall in it? ...
lol

a small victim, hoe's for paper, watch me straight up rip this whore
you ain't shatterin' glass, why the fuck you stay switchin boards?
personal. it was ok

kiddie's more? RB ain't even your home, here's an eviction notice
and i know i handed you a loss, but why are you so happy to hold it?
for you children, read wreck's sig....good personal

are you slow bitch, sit back, learn your fucking really dumb...
when heads start to elevate you get left behind like cookie crumbs
and i admit you shook me son, and in real it was goodly done...
but you got hurt quick, so now the rookies done...
finished well

Score : 3.8 out of 5 nice job sand.

Vote: Sand

punchlines = sand
flow = Wreckless
wordplay = Wreckless
meta's = sand
multi's = Wreckless
vocab = Wreckless
complexity = draw
creativity = Wreckless
enjoyment = Wreckless

Vote = Wreckless

2 nice drops but i feel wreckless deserved this, they both got in quite a few punchlines, sands was harder than wreckless but wreckless had a sweeter flow, nice wordplay and was overall a better read. might have been different through audio although i suppose all battles are.

Vote = Wreckless

yo this was a hot battle but im giving my vote to sand
i think he was better in multiple catagories as listed and i was feeling his verse more.

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

punchlines = sand
flow = sand
wordplay = Wreckless
meta's = sand
multi's = Wreckless
vocab = ehh tie
complexity = sand
creativity = Wreckless
enjoyment = eehh tie

6-5

Vote goes to sand because of more complexity and lil more hard punches...

But wreckless - good verse

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man are you shittin yourselves? sand was not "the shit" he was "shit"
wreckless definately got him
his punches were way better, so was wordplay n better flow wit multi's
i woulda ripped ya too sand
mental stamina... your a fuckin d/r, your whole break down was obviously 2 try n convince us that sand was awesome, u didn't give wreckless not credit, ya that's right
vote=wreckless
sand.. you lucky this ain't pinkslips

lol people...ur all a bunch of newbies...

putting QUOTES around something means its a META!!!!!

oh wait..do people know wut meta's are???

lmao let me explain...

but u aint got my skillz, ya ryhmes are "short" and "soft" like ya "limp-dick"!

/\ implying that ur ryhmes are like a limp dick...short and soft means that ur verses are short in length (similair to the size of ur penis, and soft meaning u dont punch hard..also mean your penis is limp) WOW you people are intelligent!!!!

also...

u a bitch-without-the-clit, ya think-kid, that you can take my "pink-slip"
dissing yourself isnt good in battles... lol

/\ HOW DID I DISS MYSELF?!?!?!?!?!? pathetic!


iight im done....

just to let ya know this battle will be posted on Street-science so we can get some intelligent votes cuz yall are just missin the target...

pathetic and embarassing....

its 3-2 we still uppin in this bitch

be-eazy