Me and Soul?uest collaborate on some Godly type shit. Remix to my first ever song, which was called Assassin ofcourse.

intro - G Deuce

verse 1 - G Deuce

verse 2 - Soul?uest

verse 3 - G Deuce

Beat produced by : Anno Domini

Assassin (Remix) - Link

link 1

link 2

Leave feedback please........

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Grim

fuck ya this is dope, you went just so lyrical on these cats man, flow was good emotion was good nice drop g deuce then that 3rd verse killed it nice lil end to it goin hard on the beat nice job, and soul quest well i do think you sounds great on smoother beats but he can work on it, hes only recorded like what 4 times lol, hes pretty good though nice lyrics he just needs work on flow and emotion.

anyway nice track man

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Grim

listening....
beats pretty cool...
the intro's pretty good..lol i like the singers in background..
The flow is pretty good.. lyrics is good... delivery is pretty nice.. ur presence on mic is there.. but not as much as it should be you know.. but i think its only because of your mic.. if you changed yor mic the the presence on mic would be perfect which is important.. but good emotion...

chorus is pretty good.. not really catchy.. wait is this chorus ?lol wiat its not.. haha its his verse.. hahah well lyrics are good in verse.. the flow is okay.. sum words seemed rush a lil so flow is jst a lil off.. delivery is okay in this verse.. but he needs to show a lil more.. but his voice is perfect for rapping.. so tell him to keep rapping n not to stop.. cuz his voice is perfect for rapping in songs..

verse 3: the lyrics is good.. haha shows u from rv (RV RULeS! *JUPMPS UP N DOWN*) the flow is good.. the presence is not as good as it should be like i sed.. jst get a better mic n ur good.. i have a karoke mic ;O) lol but yeah.. pretty tite song..

keep doing wut u do fam.. jst get a better mic for both.. n tell that other guy to keep writting also lol 7/10..

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ur vocals sounds muted or far away...

but ur flow is fine...voice sounds like Tony Self a little


2nd cat...pretty coo


solid track



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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

deuce got a sick voice; kinda hipnotic........... lyricism was good by both, but deuce seems more comfortable on the track. soul?uest's got a smooth voice that would sound better on a different beat, but this song was still hot.

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Intro is nice, likin the beat so far, When It kicks in The vocals are ill, and then the choir on the beat just works fuckin nicely.
Flow is dope, got some nice lines. Soul?uest Seems pretty dope, if a bit quiet. Flow is still nice tho, lines all seem dope. It seems like he's gettin quieter slightly to me tho?
Don't really like the beat change vocals that much, they sound like they differ from the beat.
Nice flow straight away when you come back in on the beat.
Dope last verse.

I personally really liked that, Its somethin i'd listen like, on my mp3 player. And Not Many RV artists have achieved that hard to reach spot.
Dope Shit Deuce. Hopefully we'll be hearin a lot more from you.

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thanks yall. yeh this is only like my 4th songs in a long as time, but duece is so on point he is making me step my game up. i like story-telling, slower beats. like some common, talib kweli type shit...but i really felt this beat. super ill samples. keep replying. we need the feed.

he doesnt sound anything liek tony self g deuce sounds fine hes goten alot better when we gonna collab?
this is a tight beat like someone above said u seem like u getting wuieter and quiter props
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=205738
rtf and leave me soem feed on my first audio battle if u would

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Grim

TO ME he sounds a little like TOny Self...STFU bitch.



and G deuce..>RTF if u will on my song Be AIight

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206311


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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

yo i dropped feedback for both of you.........................uppin dis shit.................

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Grim

listen..

beat is real nice, i dunno about ur voice what have u done to it???

Lyrics seem nice

SG quality is a bit shit but ok

nice......7.6/10

Good track Deuce..havent heard you in a while,nice vocal presence and lyrics as well, dope beat choice too for your style, the other cat sounded good too, overall smooth track,quality is decent too, keep at it.1

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