genius. my rhetorical insight is being noticed
by people who need to see it and anyone else who approaches
the "dopest", who cares if the real me's understood
just as long as they like it and get off the old me's wood
seem like i'm always given people the censored version,
shit, even my pops still thinks i'm a virgin
unnervin' ain't it, to see real niggaz be real
and rep tru, like they not afraid to be killed
genius. it's what my teachers called me when they thought i was fine
then realized they were too blind to see i had crossed the line
the thin one between genius and crazy that nobody sees
til they yell and unleash the hell that was trapped inside me
now they can't kill the real me or push me back across the line
i'm like Frankenstein, u gave me life now u can't take away mine.

-thank u to the ones who gave me this THUGLIFE and understands what it really means. The Hate U Give Little Infants Fucks Everyone. it's not my fault, u fucked yourself.

-Chip

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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uppin'

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200501

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

uppin'

poem i liked:http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=194418

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

never did get any feedback for this one, uppin'

link:http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=194418

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

This was ok, it wasn't really poem material,it was more like an open mic, with rhymes and the way it flowed, it wasn't bad, but if you wrote more to it, you could put this in open mic forum. It had the content of that type of piece also.

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*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

thank u very much for the feedback........ i rap, so most of my poetry flows like i'm rapping. to me poetry is based on the emotion u put in your work, so i would consider this to be a poem. good lookn on the feed, ad check out some more of the poems in my sig.

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled