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Here is an old piece that I dropped a while ago..

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ted+penetration


Unadulterated Penetration

vaginal pain shields any smile, regardless of her needs
whilest absorbic acid seeps out of her corroded arteries
tragedy strikes brief, emotions of shock remain within
slippin a mickey in wiskey proved she's violated by friends
regardless of sin, forensic evidence is shown on the forskin
no denyin the crime, on victims face, nothin but torment
fingerprints n hair folicals prove who the perpetrator is
whether its more involved, understand..she'll never have kids
with a bruised sterm, punctured lung, damage is shown now
she struggles to stand upright, her knee slightly blown out
ideas of rehibilation lessen, she grasps the walker slowly
flashes of the attack resurface, while here thoughts exploding
a marron colour covers her tears, eyeshadow readily smears
as pain of disgestin solid foods superseed her thought of fear
DNA's embedded under her nails, revealed by flouresant light
after that bitter night, she know in the fight for her life
at bedside, her life meter fades, overriden by fear of pain
deep gasps for breathe aspire, as the doctor proceeds to explain
how carramastic the youngster is, despite the vital ordeal
and how most who suffer the same fate, mostly end up killed
with her face turning plush red, tears descend toward the bed
until the wet spot beneath her hair extends to saturate her head
amnesia fades quick, at the perpetrators, she began to reminise
how one pervert cliched his fist, hittin her dead in the lips
on the canvas she sits, awakenin to nightmares in a cold sweat
one day she'd hit pubrity, but shes not close to that age yet
its a crazed death, dead to the world, none hear your cries
even when the pain scream out n introdes into your inner thighs
no more can I stand the site, my eyes are watery as I speak
and I scolded with the mere fact this girl turn 5 last week
& confrontin her parents is insane, I knew this from the start
religion fills there souls, but vengence dominates there hearts
glancin slowly at red ring on her neck, hatred escalates greater
observin the swellin proves that those at fault were not strangers
increasing is the anger, the adolescent struggles to open her eye
and proceeds to dictate, her short life and how it was deprived
now at a whisper, a name escalates throughout her fragile laranyx
while her parent comprehend she has a lessen chance of bearin kids
she rolls over onto her belly, the doctor monitors the heart device
its steadily beats at 85/minute, showin how hard she fights

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That's a sick drop fam..

Long of a read but well worth it, the flow was good, the concept was good and creative the emtion was deep and picture perfect the details was well places the metas was good image I mean what well can I say from top to bottom you stood focus and rip it....

10/10

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good looking MurDaH187...

I'm in the process of dropping 5 new pieces...I haven't written in a while, but I need to get back into this this... Here are a few topics:



Death by Deception
High Velocity
Portrait of a Misguided Youth
Fugitive Mishap
Gang Treachery


If anyone wants to collab on any of these, let me know...

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you no im down.

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Hey Fly_-E,

Pick one of the topics and write maybe 20 or so lines. I'll match the # of lines that you write and that can be our 1st crew collabo..

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Just dropped a quick piece called "isolated freedom"


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...144#post3279144


"Isolated freedom distorts my vision & breathing
under lock & key so look my hairlines reseeding
missed my son's birthday, even days of teething
pacing back n forth, I angrily await the next feeding
handcuff abrasions limit my wrists' movements
the swelling decreased to reveal reddish bruises
insinuating pain leds me to grind my teeth heavily
still recovering from solitare..think its been a week
the conception of time's irrelevant...as is my sentence
70 years for what! serving time for a tax evasion sentence
What is freedom to a prisons..thoughts keep brain pounding
Brains fatigued on my 19th escape plan, stuck on an island
technological advices ensure I detail a plan B & C
bashing my fist against the wall like I'm using T n T
names not chisseled on wall..but echos down the hall
prisoners showed respect even before I took the fall
tax evasion wasn't the only crime, but I'm in a bind
false flaggers are fight starters, tho most are harmless
The only six figures I display are on prison garments"

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Death by Deception i'll start tomorrow.

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do 16 lines if its to long people wont care to see but i would do 20 it dontt matter

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Okay,


16 lines is good... i'll piggyback off what you write...

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Heres an apology poetic piece I just dropped:

I married you to show you love & affection
Unstead I've shown you that I haven't mastered the lesson
to this regret, I promise to try harder
& bury my rotten attitude in hopes it blosoms into a garden
that'll flower my temper into a more carrying sensitivity
I know it must be hell putting up with all my tendencies
for these I ask from my heart for forgiveness
sometimes I wish that angry wasn't something I'm livin
My thoughts are vivid, whilest my wisdom is gaining
to treat you respectfully, is what I'm aiming
though my gratitude is spiteful, believe I'm working at it
but an overnight change wouldn't happen even if I had magic
Need to eliminate the hatred, but its hard see
when stress and angry daily become a part of me
the rage is uncontrollable, hence weighlifing is my escape
Maybe is a comp out, but its why I haven't treated you great
To this I know a verbal apology just wouldn't be fit
cuz anyone can state lies that come from there lips
But truthful is my ambition to dedicate a new attitude
towards you family that has showed me so much gratitude

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Here is the link to the above drop.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...338#post3279338


Let me know if anyone else wants to collabo of the other topics:

Death by Deception
High Velocity
Portrait of a Misguided Youth
Fugitive Mishap
Gang Treachery

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how about MurDah on ya Block as a topic??

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lol possibility. anymore ideas nice one murdah.

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