aight check in when you see this

ight im checking in give me liek 30 mins to right my shit

so i post mine in 30 too or wait for you??

some tactixx u should use is a fucking dictionary
take my advice seek some lyrical rehab
cuz ur lines r whack and have no vocab
u picked the wrong nigga to fuck with, you dont wanna test this
let me guess wat ur verse is gunna be filled with ,
some gangster lines, then some prewrites, and a whole lotta bullshit
bitch u cant handle Lust, my lines will hit harder then any lines u spit
u dont deserve to battle me , u should quit
ill give u a tast of mah rhymes make u delerious n shyt
it will seem like u on shrooms n got a crazzi trip
stepin to me is like jackin off to a grim reaper poster ill beat u to death

post ur shit now

I think it's safe to trust, when i say i'm quick to bust,
I must be...... this MC quick to let his skills rust,
ashes to ashes dust to dust,
my punches hit you so hard tectonic plates thrust,
my rhymes come in surplus, i got more in store,
assume the position, get down on all fours,
cause this whore gettin fucked, and im ready for war,
poor lust, looks like you're in a bad position,
another victim... my rhymes shine and glisten,
listen, your weak new york style just aint hittin,
kid's soft as a kitten, i leave lacerations everytime im rippin,
I'm not sorry for lyrically strippin your reputation,
I went easy on you kid your rhymes need elevation....

nice.....good luck.....

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Not a lot of punches in this battle. Somethings just didn't rhyme period

Rhyme Scheme- Tactixx, he had most of his lines actually rhyming, and his last few lines were really put together well

Flow- Neither, I mean, come on. Ashes to ashes, that had no place in their whatsoever, and it threw your flow way off, and Lust's flow was just all over the place

Punches- Tactixx, Lust's were just non-existant, and I liked Tactixx last couple of lines.

Overall- Tactixx had a better piece, but I think you could each use a lil elevation, hit up my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112933

Vote- Tax

this battle was pretty weak

this is how i see it..lust didnt have the best rhymes shemes and he might not have been to creative in some of his disses but i felt like he came at tactixx hard and just straight up dissed him.. tactixx alot of your verse was filler some of your rhymes were filled with weak uncreative disses like this line "ashes to ashes dust to dust,
my punches hit you so hard tectonic plates thrust,"

vote- i vote for lust on this one he came with straight out disses.. he had better disses than tactixx did on this one.. therfore i vote for lust

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uppin for votes................

uppin...dont sleep on this...ill return the favor

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