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Dervla
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Tweety vs Black Queen

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Black Queen
 
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Imagine yourself as a kid, sleeping tight w/o a burden,
The giants as your parents, handling light w/ curtains.
Now that youre up, see reality and make your doubts
you dream up a storyline to escape from the house.
Get out of your blue bed and go take a bath, sink in
playing with toy ships, I poise quick and a war begins.
Im tiny to all, but I dont compare nor try to beat them
like all kids I dont treat adults superior.. I dont even see them.
Like all spoiled brats I get what I want, for being so damn small
I dream up WORLDS daily, and Im God to them all.
CHILDSPLAY is the keyword, in the center of the piece
and fear, bets and phobias..? I dare you to ask me.
Armies and plastic faces are like legos and action figures
expiring each season for new breeds to capture fictions.
Dreaming up terrains, I imagine lands anew and with ease
inspired in frames and boxes like comic books and TVs.
Interlaced lines console me like NES and other types
cuz two-dimension was another escape to another life.
That makes me a gamer, a buttonpusher, living multiple,
with energy of an eternal pendulum.. barely being tolerable,
effecting everyone.. but now Im all grown up
and memory is intangible.. so I revise on the known past
I miss the first time, full of energy like there were ten of me,
as they were archived in stone - forever in my memory.
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Dervla
 
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Made by god from high above. Still I feel so Grounded.
I don’t have an actual diet. I can't feel nor see, I'm blinded
Sitting in the dark cold abyss, just waiting for myself to grow
Water is what I need, and the sun to blaze down here below
I can survive autumn, summer even in the blizzard heavy snow
Feeling so aroused, I can't wait to get legs so i can walk and go
But I wish I had a heart so I have real feelings and start to cry
Cause I'm Lonely down here with no friends sitting by my side
Now I'm Just A little Child with no hands and feet and no heart
Why did god create me onto this earth, where life and me are depart?

Now feeling very fictional. I wish I had a mouth so I can loudly scream
Cause it seems that no-one cares about me, nor my very own bloodstream
Feeling so dry, I wish I had knees so i can beg and beg for some water
Going Under, Dying everyday. How long can I take this pain much longer?
It's my dream to become a "Menopause". Eagering for the sun to shine
Sadness crept inside of me, will I ever in the world will look so Devine?
Trying so hard to reach that highest peak, but without my 2 dearly Friends
I must shall face defeat. Waits now till my long stream decompose to the end
I make one last plea, “I wish I had tears", thinking and imagining of me crying
Creating my own water. Then all of sudden in the darkness started breaking


The Skies are blue, the air swiftly gently forces upon my lovely pedals
The sun blazes from above it's warmth feels soothe, Like being cuddle
All these years of waiting and waiting I finally emerge from the ground
Sitting on top of the surface showing my beauty to the whole world now.
For Years it was a burden, then I started to dream and imagine things
"I wish I had tears" even without water or the sun I still manage to get wings
Up Up I went, Listened to the soil cracked, my blood streams take place
With Unlimited space, I Smiled at the fact that "I did it on my own Pace"
Color Green every-where. Now don’t feel Lonely no more, I have Friends
The Ones who will stand by me as we flatter our beauty Till the very end

*Remember this is Fiction so...Anything Can Happen...
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
 
 


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