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Old 04-06-09, 07:50 PM   #1
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Old 04-06-09, 08:34 PM   #2
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we can go 16 this time haha
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Old 04-09-09, 11:53 AM   #3
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Old 04-09-09, 08:31 PM   #4
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chill son, this is my battle thread lol, battles close on sunday, now or tomorrow or saturday wont make a difference, ill do it when I can
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Old 04-11-09, 12:49 AM   #5
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I woulda KO'ed you anyways, wack ass

I punch like a girl, my uppercuts stand you up if you test me
Definition of Irony: Me biting your line... that you bit off of Hensley
^^ See that, I get a spark of creativity then drop with my funk on
Your creativity would get a spark if a lightning bolt ever struck John
Lemme ask what the fuck's wrong? Nvm, NO ONE CARES, hide you bastard
Ask why he did it? Nah even Regis wouldn't give a fuck bout the Final answer
Using John rhymes, Final don't get any bright ideas when I bench you
Since we know all you do is Jack rhymes
AW FUCK, I MESSED UP! Now he'll start using them too -_-
Lmfao @ after being exposed no one defended ya like "I doubt he would Jack"
Act like Hens so much if I punched your stomach an egg'd pop out of ya ass
I knew you'd bite, tried looking at your best lines to get my damn hunch
But almost didn't... cuz you managed to turn HENSLEYS into a wack punch??
LOL HOW!? That made it not so easy but I caught ya
You should have atleast used his name and posed as another imposta
WOW, weren't you bitching at Nick Fletcher like you wanted to fight him?
Chill dude, cuz I proved even John Hensley recycles... and then you bite him
LMAO omfg I can't stop
LOL @ biting Hens when we already duked in leagues and I flunked him
Thanks to Final it's officially a total of three times i've beaten his punches
Lemme show you how to bite/flip without getting caught you stupid clown
Final thinks I aim like a girl, cuz my bullets tend to shoot him down

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Old 04-11-09, 06:23 AM   #6
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omfg! lmfao!

I never thought I could laugh so hard at a verse that just uses the same concept in every punch. Damn, if Final hadn't already left in shame he probably would have after this verse. That opener was a real banger, that shit had me rolling and for wording and execution it was pretty much flawless. The spark of creativity had a nice feel to it, but not as good as the opener. Regis shit was ok, I liked how you flipped his name whilst still working that biting angle. Jack rhymes was hilarious. Comic. Swaggalicious. It was another banger. And the -_- at the end just made it extra cool in my opinion.. and that's not sarcasm, it actually really did make it better. Acting like Hens was a bit weak, probably the weakest shit so far. Turning Hensley's into a wack punch was also pretty weak. Its allowed though, seeing as though you're burning the same concept over and over, lol. Imposter could've been savage, it was average. The Nick Fletcher line.. current events usage and nice wording.. lmao.. another banger again. LMAO omfg I can't stop was a nice breather, and had some comedy to it, lol. Lmao @ beating hensley punches, that shit was cool and yet another good, solid hit. Lmao @ the aim shit, it was pathetic, but it was cool because it was meant to be pathetic.


shit, jack should get verse of the year for abusing a concept in one verse but still making it hilarious and entertaining.
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Old 04-11-09, 08:51 AM   #7
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